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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Mine do I have the courage deep just to lay my heart at your feet a whisper to be a secret sound bounce of wall an echo found these drops of who I am in drip my skin falls away unzip what is this so much that I fear in saying words that make it all disappear my voice said it and it made me nude where is my cover lost to include tender hands touch so unkind as I go on as it all unwinds loud ticking ringing in time shall this ever ever be mine "I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (08-06-2003 02:53 AM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
It echos..deeply.. haunting and desperate.. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is outstanding...deep and poignant. Eric |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
enjoyed this write, and mostly this part: what is this so much that I fear in saying words that make it all disappear my voice said it and it made me nude ----------- regards sudhir |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I know the caution, h. scary, but worth it, I think.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"do I have the courage deep just to lay my heart at your feet" deeply felt... Susan C. |
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