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On the Inside Looking Out
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On the Inside Looking Out |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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On the Inside Looking Out The air is thick with tears releasing their ache, the chill ripples through and I shiver as I patrol my life, hers, wondering if brighter days are around the corner if they can replace the sunsets of our past and will the silence stay my words, hold back the moans that wail internally. There will be black to wear, a wardrobe I have plenty of, and heartstrings played and another journal entry of poetry spoken before all, then placed in a keepsake box, I plan to make so I will have felt useful while stuck between these lines. Nothing is easy anymore. I think selfishly at times about what am I going to do when I am all alone, as if my aloneness now is not the same. I would send you this rain, but it fits my mood and the damp gives excuse to sit here on the inside... looking out. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSisterOfMyHeart~ I so feel your ache~ Know please that I keep constant prayer vigil~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, I am so sorry. I wish there was something I could do to ease your pain. Both of you are staying in my thoughts and prayers, sweet lady. Hugs for you and your sister, Ethel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Marge, you have been the one constant in my life for almost 5 years now...hard to believe isn't it? hugss M |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
This reads so sad nakdthoughts. I like it. On the inside looking out. Alice Cooper once wrote a song titled that...and now whenever I see it in print I always stop to read. Thanks for the momentary glimpse of insight. You friend always. KRM |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You express your deepest feelings so openly, so honestly--and so eloquently. I could not help but be moved by your words. Healing prayers are being sent for your sister, you, and the rest of your family. Sending a rainbow of healing lights, EA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ethel..thank you. I am ok...just watching the rainfall and wondering what tomorrow will bring... I am getting use to the wait/weight of wondering and not knowing when... thank you again for caring  M |
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