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garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-09-13 06:08 AM

~~><~~
I love you from the depths of heart
We tell each other all day long
Forever, always, never part
I love you from the depths of heart
From the day we met, from the start
Our hearts together sang a song
I love you from the depths of heart
We tell each other all day long

~~><~~

As you whisper my name softly
I feel your love beyond measure
You say "I love you" so quietly
As you whisper my name softly
From your heart, words flowing gently
More precious than any treasure
As you whiper my name softly
I feel your love beyond measure
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[This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-13-2003 07:18 AM).]

Lotus Breeze
Member

since 2003-09-06

Posts 112

1 posted 2003-09-13 06:12 AM

Poem is very good,
I hear say whispers get attention, this whisper worth much attention

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-09-13 08:21 AM

Thank you, Lotus Breeze. That's a very nice
thing for you to say.

Hugs

Ethel

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-09-13 10:37 AM

Beautiful!
Eric

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-09-13 11:05 AM

Thanks, Eric. I'm really glad that
you like them.

Hugs

Ethel

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

5 posted 2003-09-13 11:38 AM

Bravo. Interesting rhyme scheme. Now all we need is Frank Mill's song - Prelude To Romance, a little candle light...and well you know what comes next! 8-) Beautiful piece garysgirl.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-09-13 11:48 AM

Thank you, Evocative. Nice music to go
with the reading of it.

Hugs

Ethel

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2003-09-13 12:04 PM

--and if you listen very closely, you will hear the wind whispering both of your names...

Linda

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-09-13 08:18 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is so romantic and beautiful, sweet friend, I dream so much of whispering love poetry into my dream girl's ears so she can comfortably fall asleep happily each night in the future, yay, this is a gorgeous gem, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2003-09-13 08:19 PM

Softly nice...James

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2003-09-13 08:39 PM

They say if you want to get someone's attention...just whisper.
This is beautiful Ethel.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes ~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-09-14 02:00 AM

Linda, I do believe you're right!! Thanks.

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Noah, thanks for liking my poem. I im glad
that you do.

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James, thank you. I'm glad that you like my poem.

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Nancy, it does seem that whispers sound more
clear sometimes. Thanks, lady.

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I really do appreciate all of you.
Hugs to each of you

Ethel

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