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Lotus Breeze
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0 posted 2003-09-13 05:53 AM


Rain touch the store’s window
Tapping a steady rhythm
Thoughts adding the words
Soon a melody
I smiling with my new song


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-09-13 07:15 AM



I am smiling
with your sky water song
as well.

Lovely, Lotus Breeze

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-09-13 07:17 AM


This is a very beautiful melody of
song you have written, Lotus Breeze.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-09-13 09:27 AM


LotusBreeze~
Your thoughts flow so softly~
Greatly enjoyed this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2003-09-13 09:54 AM


nicely done...

M

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