Open Poetry #28 |
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Sky Water |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112![]() |
Rain touch the store’s window Tapping a steady rhythm Thoughts adding the words Soon a melody I smiling with my new song |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am smiling with your sky water song as well. Lovely, Lotus Breeze |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very beautiful melody of song you have written, Lotus Breeze. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LotusBreeze~ Your thoughts flow so softly~ Greatly enjoyed this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nicely done... M |
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