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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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0 posted 2003-09-13 01:51 AM



As i dim the lights and pull
down the mint green satin
sheets and fluff my pillow

my eyes begin tearing drops
of the love i had for you

probably you're out cruising
all dressed in new and dancing
your flirting eyes

perhaps we were wrong for
each other at the time

but as i remember it was
both that wanted solitude
and a solid relationship

was it because i was blind
or were you using me as a
safe harbor till the storm
within you calmed

yes my heart was fooled by
the parasite of your love

you only told me the things
my heart yearned to hear

and you played the part so
very well

so now i craw between the
sheets alone with my heart

bleeding my remaining love
for you


                           

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-09-13 01:53 AM


sorry Glenn...you know where i am if ya need me
vlraynes
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2 posted 2003-09-13 01:54 AM



Glenn...your heart bleeds through in this write.
So sad, yet beautifully expressed.

Hugs to you, friend...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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3 posted 2003-09-13 06:35 AM


Q~ This is a winding ache. loved it very much, and know it well.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-09-13 06:49 AM


Glenn, this is sad, but one of your
most beautifully written.
Hugs
Ethel

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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5 posted 2003-09-13 09:13 AM


Hi Q.....
Hope this is just words and not a for real happening.If real so sad, if not, still a sad poem of pain.
Hugs coming your way.
Bon-Bon

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