Open Poetry #28 |
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Regret (rp edit) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space ![]() |
across a desertland of broken dreams souls worn thin what time does not ravage slowly regret quickly will |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I like this, Raph. Much said in just a few well-chosen words. Nicely done. Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Raph, Who l*ves ya, baby? ![]() |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
One of my faves from you, nice to see it again. Oh Raphael, have I got a story for you! It's not that good, but it involves a near brush (kind of) lol, with Mr Jones. missed ya, you old hag. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
and you have just peeked into my very soul with your words . . . *smile* please get back in here and write more often . . . Sue xxoo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Yep... Susan ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Regret" can drain us of the energy that we may still have left. However, I do have a feeling for where you are coming from. Extra loving hugs, EA |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
r...yes it does...and you inspire me i will post reply later...ty ...h |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
It's just human. We can't get it right every time. Can't beat yourself up about it. Learn from it, and move forward being a little wiser than when going in. Thanks for sharing. ![]() ![]() SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-13-2003 12:57 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ciao Raffaele! Your thoughts neat and your words sharp as a razor. Even though it sounds pessimistic, it's maybe an invitation to let go of regrets, living fully in the now, dreaming new dreams. Sogna ancora, Raf! Abbracci. Margherita ![]() |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks everybody, letting go would be nice i know but knowing is always easier than doing..blah |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Nice write Raph, I regret every single regret... Jason |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
sometimes..it is so good, i wish that they were longer And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I have no words.... but promise me something next time we speak? smack me over the head. ok? meh mxx Oh, you speak to me in riddles |
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