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Endlessecho
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I live within myself

0 posted 2003-09-12 02:58 PM



“Answer her,” he hisses low.
I stare at the tablecloth instead.
His silence is worse than his threats.
I want to crawl inside his head.

The thoughts in there could harden me.
Make me capable of living through war.
Make me live life out of sheer stubbornness
Instead of wondering why it can’t be more.

She eats quietly amid the silence.
She waits as still as I.
But she isn’t waiting for an answer.
She’s trying not to cry.

The question has already been forgotten.
But he doesn’t care about an answer.
The question never really mattered.
Just so we all know he’s the master.

Master of this little home;
this silent shrouded tomb.
He holds the silence over us.
I’m miles from my room.

The food is cold.
The drinks are evaporating.
As I sit and ponder.

I would answer him
Or, in actuality, her
But what was the question, I wonder.



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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-09-12 05:22 PM


Master of this little home;
this silent shrouded tomb.
He holds the silence over us.
I’m miles from my room.

The food is cold.
The drinks are evaporating.
As I sit and ponder.

I would answer him
Or, in actuality, her
But what was the question, I wonder


Oh goodness me, this one hurts. I really hope that
you aren't writing this from your own personal
experience, though I hate for anyone to have to
go through this in their family.
Hugs to you  
Ethel

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-09-12 05:25 PM


love the ending

M

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