Open Poetry #28 |
Look at Me |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
+*+*+ Close your eyes and look at me ~ at the me that is inside. I'm more my dear, than just veneer, ~ that source of manly pride. You did say, on our wedding day, that your love would last forever. But when quest was won, vows were undone, and our marriage you did sever. You never looked beyond the glitz, I was show-cased on your arm. What I believed, to be eternal love, was your self-serving charm. I too was blind and did not see, the pages twixt the covers. If I knew then, what I know now, we'd never have been lovers! But since you've gone, you've changed your mind, and want what can't be yours, but I have grown, new seeds I've sown, and now I've closed the doors. Close your eyes and look at me ~ at the me that is inside. I'm more, my dear, than just veneer ~ that source of manly pride! +*+*+ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-10-2003 11:00 PM).] |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Earth Angel...Very strong words. Enjoyed very much. More power too you dear friend...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Linda~ This was superb! Susan |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I'm with you on this one....I wonder how many people have seen the "real me" and not just my looks....not many I'm sure....Great Write! ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
life has many challenges and true eternal love is the most difficult, You'v expressed this very well. Lady Poetess
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
for I have grown, new seeds I've sown, and I've closed all the doors. Hi Linda, guess it's a case of just too little, too late! You have indeed become a woman of your own! God bless you and I pray you both do what is right for each of you. Huggles sweetie ... Marti Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You wrote this perfectly, Linda! And you know what, I think mine is changing his mind, too. He has been calling me. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Paul ~ I was happily married for many years, and we had two lovely daughters. I was being somewhat fascetious with this poem. I most definitely would have married him again, even if I had known beforehand the heartache that was in store for me--for the joy of our beautiful family I would not have wanted to miss out on. We are very good friends and he sees the real me these days--and he likes what he sees--on the inside as well as the outside. I am comfortable with our friendship but I could never be anything but a friend to him any more. I really did move on with my life. Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-11-2003 12:12 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Susan ~ Thank you, Susan! "Superb" is a super word! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
skyshine ~ Have the men in your life read your beautiful poetry--then they will fall in love with your inside and well as your outside! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Q, that is so true! ~ the strangest thing is that my husband and I will always love each other. In fact, he recently gave me a birthday card and in it he wrote, "Linda, you're not getting older--You're getting better!" He now sees the REAL me, and that is a wonderful feeling. I enjoy our friendship and our daughters are so happy that we can all be together without any tension. It was also important for me to show the importance of forgiveness to my daughters. Forgiveness truly is a gift we give to ourselves for it has brought the joy back into my life. The anger and pain are gone and I am truly happy with my new life. EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-11-2003 12:46 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti ~ He realized too late that "The Grass Is Greener Over the Septic Tank"! (Erma Bombeck) lol Loveya! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sweet Sue ~ Just be careful! Some men really want what they can't have! Remember, you've come a long way baby! Loving hugs, Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
But since you've gone, you've changed your mind, and want what can't be yours, but I have grown, new seeds I've sown, and now I've closed the doors. Linda, sometimes people don't realize what they've lost until they have lost it. Hugs to you, my friend Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Ethel! 'Tis sad, but 'tis so true. Huggums, Linda ~A survivor and a thriver! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Linda, I'm so sorry to hear of your failed previous marriage, sweet friend, sadly so many fail to see the beauty in the inside of ones heart and though I am happy that he now can see the person you are as a friend, I think it is wise that you accept him as a friend and nothing more! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you speak with pure and honest heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Wow...this is exceptional....and I've looked at you, and into you many times...without ever seeing your face...and I've grown to know you so well.... |
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