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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-09-12 12:16 PM



Heartache On The Mend
~*Marge Tindal*~

Another heartache on the mend
back to loving once again
Feeling the pull to where I've been
calling to me ... heart-in-mend
and I whisper ...
yes~


One more reason to explore
the need of giving so much more
No more heartache I implore
just a reason to adore
the very all of sharing
another day with you
and so ...
I do~

J-ust
U-ndulating emotion
S-ometimes
T-rue

A-nother

P-our of ink
O-n page of blue
E-motions not to be
M-isconstrued

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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1 posted 2003-09-12 12:22 PM


Big Smiles for this. Thank you so much Marge. It was worth the read.
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2 posted 2003-09-12 12:22 PM


Beautiful words and thanks for the explanation!

Huggles, Marti

Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you.

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3 posted 2003-09-12 01:09 PM


No more heartache I implore
just a reason to adore
the very all of sharing
another day with you

Ah, yes... to have this... is to have everything. *S*

Beautiful!

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4 posted 2003-09-12 01:28 PM


Lovely verse Marge...
and enjoyed the explanatory acrostic!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
   I still have sand in my shoes ~

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5 posted 2003-09-12 01:29 PM


There is always a reason to love...
TD

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6 posted 2003-09-12 02:54 PM



This is lovely, Marge.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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7 posted 2003-09-12 03:42 PM


You're a marvel, you know that? Dunno how you come up with things that are both creative and beautiful, so consistently.

No more heartache...I'll drink to that!

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8 posted 2003-09-12 03:45 PM


Marge/sis

I guess heartache is a part of life...sure makes you appreciate the happy loving times.  

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9 posted 2003-09-12 04:01 PM


Hi, Marge! I actually was looking for an explanation! lol Lovely poem.


EA

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10 posted 2003-09-12 05:31 PM


no explanation ever needed...*s...

lovely form and words..
hugss
M

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11 posted 2003-09-12 06:50 PM


A trusting soul you are, dear Marge.


Hugs,

Corinne

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12 posted 2003-09-13 01:39 AM


Dear Marge:  I'm so glad you have someone near and dear to share your life with!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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13 posted 2003-09-13 01:49 AM


yes~
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14 posted 2003-09-14 12:29 PM


do keep sharing
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