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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-09-09 08:42 PM

I hold you in
   this heart so worn

  beaten, tattered
     weathered and torn

    It once had life
   this heart I mourn

      laughter and tears
     and vows so sworn

  Ill, it's fallen
     your flower's thorn

    and now awaits
       to be reborn

Into darkness
  where you're adorn

     fallen I have ...
       in darkness scorn

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2003-09-09 08:45 PM

this is way too sad

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-11 08:26 AM

feelings expressed,,,

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-09-11 11:28 PM

come...let's dance in the darkness then

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2003-09-12 11:07 AM

so mirrored the reflection, I sometimes dont like to look....(you know) peace hon...

ME~

The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

5 posted 2003-09-12 02:28 PM

"I hold you in
   this heart so worn"

All that matters is that they're held in the heart.  That means so much. If they look down on your heart, they're not worthy. Who's heart hasn't been through a few wars?  Who doesn't have scars?

sorry I went off there. (coulda kept going)  I like that line and this poem very much.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2003-09-12 05:22 PM

yes, very sad for you Craig...but well done as always
hugs
M

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

7 posted 2003-09-13 06:24 AM

Craig, beautiful rhyme, it felt quite as If i was stepping back in time reading it, to times of castles and kings and queens.

breathtaking, you get better n better. It's nice to see you on these pages a little more often.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2003-09-13 12:07 PM

This was so beautiful...

I found it sad but hopeful...

I really loved it and I am saving it..

Susan

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2003-09-13 12:11 PM

I will gift to you
fallen snow, to cleanse your heart.
Remember spring blooms.

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2003-09-13 04:41 PM

Craig, I have been right in this space, and somehow escaped. You will too. Beautifully written.
Sandra

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

11 posted 2003-09-13 04:45 PM

This is so full of

Very sad.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-13-2003 04:46 PM).]

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

12 posted 2003-09-13 04:49 PM

shara, yes this is too sad, i looked at it again, but its so well written, as always hes the man..........but ladies,
we have to cheer this guy up somehow

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-13-2003 04:50 PM).]

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

13 posted 2003-09-14 12:14 PM

Q - I try to make my words to feel ...
    after all, isn't that poetry?

Dix - I am right behind you ... you lead!!
          (its awful dark out there)

Lauren - None of us like to look at ourselves
         in such light ...
                ... yet we do exsist.
               (peace 2u2)

Eecho - It does matter "what" is held
        but it eases knowing it is accepted.

        Scars only toughen the outside,
        we remain the same inside.

[This message has been edited by ctowen (09-14-2003 12:23 AM).]

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

14 posted 2003-09-14 12:19 PM

Maureen - Sad for many ... but your smile
          always warms my lips to do the same!

Gemma - Time is an element of my writing ...

        Perhaps a stroll through the courtyard later,
        my queen ... we could talk to the stars!

Sue - Yes, hope developes faith, and faith heals.

[This message has been edited by ctowen (09-14-2003 12:25 AM).]

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

15 posted 2003-09-14 12:23 PM

KC - ... and I, in return,
     summer the nights that shall fall,
         remembering Love.

Sandra - Glad to hear you found some of that missing magic ...

         Hold tight, sweet Moon!!!

Shara - Many the heart are sad from time to time ...
        a sign of REAL emotions.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

16 posted 2003-09-14 12:28 PM

My, my ... my Michele

     something seems to have struck a cord?

     Want to spread a little cheer?
       How about a new photo for your profile?
       (one that might stay awhile, you change like the seasons)

      Thank one, and all, for the read and comments.

[This message has been edited by ctowen (09-14-2003 12:31 AM).]

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

17 posted 2003-09-14 07:51 AM

craigster,
i only had 2 photos since ive been on, thats not a lot
most have had the same, if not more........
i am a woman of many sides, BUTT the one id
like to share wont be allowed, ya know?

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

18 posted 2003-09-14 10:04 AM

sad piece..

good to sift though

hugs, g

"Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams

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