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EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

0 posted 2003-09-12 11:52 AM

She smiles and my no's quickly become yes,
She crooks her finger and I rush thither,
She purses lips...I yearn for a caress,
And when she frown's my hopes quickly wither.
There's sorcery within her comely stare,
The fragrance she sports confuses the heart,
Satins and silks are what she'll often wear,
And I must confess she doth look right smart.
She walks in social circles I've ne'er known,
She's Jaguar, Ferrari, and Rolls Royce too,
She's Chanel, Bejar, not dime store cologne,
She says not, "Goodbye," but rather, "Adieu!"
And yet despite these faults I still love her,
Even though I'm cotton and she is fur.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-09-12 11:56 AM

Now, you almost made me repost
a poem of Chanel...I'm enjoying
your poetry, Kevin. Keep it up.

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

2 posted 2003-09-12 11:58 AM

Thank-you Sunshine. :-) I'd really like to see that poem. LOL!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-09-12 12:50 PM

Kevin, this is very touching...would make any woman blush

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

4 posted 2003-09-12 12:54 PM

very perceiving look. quite interesting.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-09-12 12:56 PM

The fragrance she sports confuses the heart,

like this line...especially *s

M

MorninGlory
Member

since 2003-08-30

Posts 175
Oklahoma

6 posted 2003-09-12 01:11 PM

Kevin, this is delightful.. and believe me, most women would prefer cotton. Nothing better than clean sheets, yum!! well.. you know what i mean. lol~

~ becky

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-09-12 01:26 PM

Kevin, this is really pretty. I like
the way you write your thoughts.

Hugs

Ethel

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

8 posted 2003-09-12 02:51 PM

Thank-you passing shadows. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. A heartfelt thanks to you Endlessecho. You too nakdthoughts. LOL! Oh how appropriately your nick goes with the poem. Hi MorninGlory! Women prefer clean sheets do they? (Snicker.) Thank you garysgirl. I really appreciate all the comments ladies. Why did only women like the poem though? (Giggle!) This little sonnet was an attempt to describe my love for a girl whom I once thought to be out of muy league. Sometimes though words win a heart where looks never could. 8-)

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

9 posted 2003-09-12 04:19 PM

Sweet and beautiful Shakespeare ;-)

You are indeed a great writer.

Hugs

Ribbit

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