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Jack- In- The- Green
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since 2003-09-11
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The green woodlands.

0 posted 2003-09-11 07:27 AM



Where did my life go when you were not there?
No place to run to only time, time to stand and stare.

a life ordinary now,but your voice echos in the hall of my mind.

To your face and life i am now blind.

You will remain forever on the beach of my memory.

[This message has been edited by Jack- In- The- Green (09-11-2003 07:35 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-09-11 07:31 AM


Jack- In- The- Green
Happens quite often,enjoyed the read.

Jack- In- The- Green
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since 2003-09-11
Posts 31
The green woodlands.
2 posted 2003-09-11 07:37 AM


Thank you Mr tabin for enjoying my words.

Jack.

Larry C
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3 posted 2003-09-11 07:40 AM


Jack,
I'm with nice. Good write. And welcome. Hope you like it here half as much as I have.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2003-09-11 07:47 AM



Jack, you keep writing, we'll direct you to where...   Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Paula Finn
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missouri
5 posted 2003-09-12 10:34 AM


Welcome to our world...nicely written
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-09-12 10:46 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Enjoyed your opening post.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
   I still have sand in my shoes ~

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
Posts 364
Washington
7 posted 2003-09-12 11:43 AM


Terrific entrance! Fine write!
WELCOME to PIP!
Eager to read more of your work!

Blessings!
Shirl


'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

[This message has been edited by JilGirl (09-12-2003 04:49 PM).]

Midnitesun
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Gaia
8 posted 2003-09-12 12:00 PM


Welcome to Passions!
With your pen name, will we get to read some nature poetry?
Hope you'll enjoy the view in these blue pages.  

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279

9 posted 2003-09-12 12:28 PM


Loss can hurt so bad. Sorry you are missing her. Nice sentiment. Thanks!
garysgirl
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10 posted 2003-09-12 12:31 PM


Jack, welcome to Passions In Poetry. I
really hope that you like it here as much as I do.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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11 posted 2003-09-12 04:08 PM




(big hugggssssss) Awwwwww, this is a beautiful heartaching debut, sweet friend, always cherish these memories dear to your heart and know another set of prints will etch upon the sands of your heart and take you by the hand, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet Jack In The Green, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your beautiful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Nightshade
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just out of reach
12 posted 2003-09-12 04:56 PM


Very nice write.
Welcome to Passions!
Have fun here.
Chris

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