Open Poetry #28 |
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Jack- In- The- Green Junior Member
since 2003-09-11
Posts 31The green woodlands. |
Where did my life go when you were not there? No place to run to only time, time to stand and stare. a life ordinary now,but your voice echos in the hall of my mind. To your face and life i am now blind. You will remain forever on the beach of my memory. [This message has been edited by Jack- In- The- Green (09-11-2003 07:35 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jack- In- The- Green Happens quite often,enjoyed the read. |
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Jack- In- The- Green Junior Member
since 2003-09-11
Posts 31The green woodlands. |
Thank you Mr tabin for enjoying my words. Jack. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Jack, I'm with nice. Good write. And welcome. Hope you like it here half as much as I have. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Jack, you keep writing, we'll direct you to where... Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Welcome to our world...nicely written |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Enjoyed your opening post. I look forward to reading more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Terrific entrance! Fine write! WELCOME to PIP! Eager to read more of your work! Blessings! Shirl 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - Always remember to keep them fluffed but, never, EVER ruffle them! [This message has been edited by JilGirl (09-12-2003 04:49 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions! With your pen name, will we get to read some nature poetry? Hope you'll enjoy the view in these blue pages. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Loss can hurt so bad. Sorry you are missing her. Nice sentiment. Thanks! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jack, welcome to Passions In Poetry. I really hope that you like it here as much as I do. Hugs Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Awwwwww, this is a beautiful heartaching debut, sweet friend, always cherish these memories dear to your heart and know another set of prints will etch upon the sands of your heart and take you by the hand, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet Jack In The Green, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your beautiful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice write. Welcome to Passions! Have fun here. Chris |
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