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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-09-12 04:12 AM

Forget my
spilling of heart.

It meant nothing.

It's still so early,
but you're

gone
gone
gone..

don't let me
be alone,
like you..

you make
me
weak.

Forget me..

gone
gone
gone..

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-12 04:16 AM

terrifically penned,,, lady poetess

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

2 posted 2003-09-12 06:07 AM

Nice write!
You leave much between the lines!
Clever!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-09-12 07:46 AM

Your spilling of the heart means everything, and to those who do not realize that, well, the heck with em....smiles and many hugs sent your way, a very good write.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-09-12 08:05 AM

Kaoru
Gone but not gone, enjoyed.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2003-09-12 08:10 AM

Enjoyed this, Meghan. Nicely done.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-09-12 08:26 AM

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

7 posted 2003-09-12 10:39 AM

in the words of an auctioneer ...

         "... going once, going twice ..."

     A spilt heart like yours .... priceless!

(hold pressure directly over the wound until bleeding stops)

     oxox   *S

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

8 posted 2003-09-12 10:42 AM

Beautiful, simply exquisite, like a single rose on a long white table. I have a feeling that there will be no forgetting, ever.

This to my library for sure.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

9 posted 2003-09-12 03:30 PM

Reminds me of a certain delish Violent Femmes song.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2003-09-12 04:11 PM

like a blister in the sun.....? Know this feeling me marbles are gone gone gone

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