Open Poetry #28 |
Thank you all, for your tolerance. |
Abe Senior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 694Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end! |
YESTERDAY My heart was really aching And I cried, for half, this day I yearned for one to talk to But, I got the pay-back, pay. Nowhere to turn my heart From those, I turned away And no way, to be heard Anything, I had to say. Oh, they read my words And said, I had the way But, all that I have said I should’ve said, yesterday! Del 9-11-2003 Del "Abe" Jones |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
But....it's never too late love your poem, much truth there Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (09-12-2003 10:14 AM).] |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
What are you talking about? NO "shoulds" here!! I got so much out your writing today. Keep on! Stick your hand out now, and I'll rap your knuckles for ya'....~K~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
point well taken thank you Del |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Amen to that -- I do know that feeling well, just as you bring it here. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sadly, we're all guilty of that...leaving something unsaid, or saying it too late. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, Abe... |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
There is always more to say. Love it. I think my own poetic song will end roughly 10 years after I have departed this realm! (Wink!) They can take my keyboard when they can pry it from my hands. Wonderful poem Abe. Keep it up. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Don't should on yourself! It stains the soul. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well written Del,...and much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Del, I enjoyed reading this. We have all felt this at some time or other...like we could have said more...or less. Hugs Ethel |
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