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Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2003-08-05 10:05 PM

your tears reached down and gripped my hand
so tightly the blood ran cold
for once it felt good to have a mind

falling down in the course of seconds
scolding eyes were upon my bare back
worst of all i wanted to remeber
the mere minutes it took you to take me
and break me into the pieces i carry in a bag
close to my fingertips, and next to the glue
with which i use to play with
keeping myself together in a self crisis
now the blackened wall feels cool on my face
smeared with red marker dubbed blood
touched the electric box, i feel the heat
wishing i could be engulfed by it
not knowing why

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

[This message has been edited by Riley (08-05-2003 10:06 PM).]

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-08-05 10:12 PM

following you..I am a witch and need bunny for my stew

Great poem. I liked the last part the most

I like coldness meself. I put my face against glass and wish i could be frozen..engulfed in that. and don't know why. I guess we are dfferent in that way.

hmmm. I'm listening to the song "I will survive"

a little out of the usual

sigh Ri..think I'm going to go to bed. for once.

insanity is not a crime

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

2 posted 2003-08-06 11:15 AM

tankie tankie for replying wind........we are the evil little thangs ain't we

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-09-12 02:46 PM

"falling down in the course of seconds
scolding eyes were upon my bare back
worst of all i wanted to remeber
the mere minutes it took you to take me
and break me into the pieces i carry in a bag
close to my fingertips, and next to the glue
with which i use to play with
keeping myself together in a self crisis"

You just etched a moment of truth Riley.

So glad I went backtracking today.

and smiling at Wind, I am a witch too--so I say "poof! Back to the top with you!"

Nice work Riley.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-09-15 10:14 AM

the mere minutes it took you to take me
and break me into the pieces i carry in a bag
close to my fingertips, and next to the glue
with which i use to play with
keeping myself together in a self crisis
like these lines.... nicely done Riley..

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