I daydream as I...stare into the night sky.

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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-09-11 12:12 PM

I sink into a large dew
drop.
A honey-suckle
sweet moon
shadow.

I
close my eyes to
welcome the
liquid sunshine.

I'm no longer burdened
by the
fear
of having
nothing else to write.

Here,
I drown myself in
the sky.
My signiture in
the clouds.

My hymn
written in the fog.

I will be remembered
for only this
piece..
This small
scratch on what is me..

So small, I am
compared to this little
portion
of outer-space..

I can't tell where
I end,
or where I begin.

And how in this state of mine
I finally wish I could cry,
out of pure wanting..
Out of seeing something I could hardly
withstand..

Not
for heartache
nor the inability
to express
how this water feels
as a
cave around me..

For the understanding
that dawns upon me...
how lucky
I'd still be
without
a daydream.

[This message has been edited by Kaoru (09-11-2003 12:17 AM).]

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-09-11 12:14 PM

Crystal

MorninGlory
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since 2003-08-30

Posts 175
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-09-11 12:36 PM

What a thought, drowning yourself in the sky - beautiful poem, daydreaming while staring at the heavens ..

~ becky

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-09-11 12:38 PM

sighsssss

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2003-09-11 12:49 PM

"I sink into a large dew
drop.
A honey-suckle
sweet moon
shadow."

beautiful...h

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

5 posted 2003-09-11 01:54 AM

This is great.
Really liked it a lot

MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

6 posted 2003-09-11 03:38 AM

Here,
I drown myself in
the sky.
Great line.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2003-09-11 04:29 AM

So beautiful, Meghan...
If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2003-09-11 04:44 AM

wonderful, to dream or not to dream.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

9 posted 2003-09-11 05:45 AM

Sweetly surreal...a new and different world you take us to..interesting...

Goldenrose.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2003-09-11 06:52 AM

I'm no longer burdened
by the
fear
of having
nothing else to write.

Here,
I drown myself in
the sky.
My signiture in
the clouds.

there is no need for words when you can get into that sweet space.....
tho you speak of it well.....
i love to go there too

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

11 posted 2003-09-11 06:54 AM

A beautiful daydream so wonderfully penned.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

serametheicebound
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since 2003-09-04

Posts 8
South Africa-Free State

12 posted 2003-09-11 07:54 AM

This is deep and left me speechless.
Can u check my lines and reply on them Please?U can critisise if u wish.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2003-09-11 08:08 AM

Kaoru
Your symbols wave upon the blue. Well done.

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

14 posted 2003-09-11 08:20 AM

Soft, sweet echoes of thought-filled nights ....

... and endless dreams.

Yes, BEAUTIFUL!!

bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

15 posted 2003-09-11 12:03 PM

You won't ever run out of things to write about, Megh,
'cause you are those things which you write about.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

16 posted 2003-09-11 04:26 PM

enjoyed

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

17 posted 2003-09-11 10:41 PM

dream on ... oh yes ... dream on

Grear write here!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

18 posted 2003-09-11 10:46 PM

I sink into a large dew
"drop.
A honey-suckle
sweet moon
shadow.

I
close my eyes to
welcome the
liquid sunshine."

~ You not only have the soul of a poet, you ARE a poet!

EA

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

19 posted 2003-09-12 03:20 AM

awesomely beautifully sad

heartpiper
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since 2003-09-02

Posts 57

20 posted 2003-09-12 03:31 AM

Warmly touching.

Iyad

"Hallow the body as a temple to comeliness and sanctify the heart as a sacrifice to love; love recompenses the adorers."
Khalil Gibran

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