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Too Deep |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I cloudn't sleep Because I went too deep for love I thought I had it all And I went too deep for love Now everything has gone Gone too deep I lost everything Everything I had Cause I went too deep for love And I couldn't sleep at all At night Thought I was strong So strong to hold the key Now It seems Iam wrong wrong to go for love Cause I lost everything Everything I had I went too deep and now I fall apart It hurts me When I think of love The love I had But I went too deep for love I was wrong to love The love is too deep for me And now love is too deep for me Sometime is hard for me to find Now I couldn't sleep Because I went too deep It wasn't too easy to give or live with it I went too deep too deep for love That I couldn't sleep Too deep for love.... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
yes diving in to deep can bring grief later, you expressed this very well,, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Can't tell you how many times I went to work with no sleep...for the same reasons...think...think...thinking too much...so hard to stop the brain at night... I enjoyed this very much.... Susan |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Enjoyed this vandana. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
One day you will find the love that you deserve and the depth to it will make no difference for it will be in the depth that you find the ultimate happines.Well penned herer. Crystal |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sleep could be such blessed relief, if only we had a way to turn off the thoughts...oh yes, I understand this very well!!! Enjoyed, vandana....~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Vandana, I know this feeling ever too well, dearest friend, I fell too deeply for Joanna and then she said she never loved me on New Years Day and faked the whole thing! (sad sigh) You will find true happiness as your golden heart is so deserving of it, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes, it is very important that both share similar feelings...hoping that this is the one it is easy to give too much...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
vandana, never fault yourself for loving too deeply. Perhaps the next man in your life will be the right man for you. Love shouldn't hurt. ~ May you sleep well, dream well and love well again... Loving, healing hugs, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always write just like a song....I love this |
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King of Hearts Junior Member
since 2003-09-12
Posts 32 |
I agree sounds like a song...drowning in love. or Deep Sleep..love is a chance..we all must take..it is better to have loved..than not have loved at all. [This message has been edited by King of Hearts (09-12-2003 03:16 AM).] |
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