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A Final Incarnation Wish
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A Final Incarnation Wish |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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My bed beckons me my weary body and racing mind long to rest But I am scared to close the eyes that keenly keep watch over a broken spirit I long to dream of lifetimes past to check the hall that records what is next I want the comfort of arms from another time show me it was predestined and I knew how it would be Remind me I choose long before I become so I may be better, that I may stop the incarnations of a tired soul |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Oh my friend, lay down and rest well.For my spirit will watch over your body, heart, and soul.The angels are with you tonight and every other night.  Crystal |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
feelings very well penned,,,, |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Such a tired body.. deserves the rest it's earned. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Crystal~ Thank you sweets...I am going to sleep now. Susan |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Q~Thank you darling... Meg~Thank you...so weary today...ummm...this morning... Susan |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Susan...Rest you soul I have some good friends and that's their job, to watch over people that need watching over. Very revealing poem. Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Twould be nice to look ahead to know what is before us, while studying the past, only gleaning what we can from those that walked before... ~*~ Liking this train of write, Susan... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Yes... the train of write is well done..the thoughts ones with depth.. the ache real.. you out did yourself my friend.. I think one of the best for the relaxed honesty it seems to convey and the depth of questioning.. bravo! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Paul~Thank you! Karilea~Thanks, a book I read actually started some thinking along these lines and I applied the theory to my life..and this writing is what came out of it... Ron~Thank you kind sir!  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Reads as a prayer Sue. One I know by heart too. "Give me love. Give me love. Give me peace on Earth. Give me life. Give me life-- Keep me free from birth." --George Harrison (o'course...smile) May he, me AND you find that prayer answered-- Enjoyed. (and as much as I miss him, I wouldn't wish him back here...)  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Very well written. Be careful of that for which you ask. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
nothing less than what I would expect from you so..that IS a good thing  And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Akashic Records, Reincarnation... this poem is rich in the topics that capture my interest, but you speak from a tired, broken spirit--and that saddens me. May you find what you are looking for in those Hallowed Halls. Loving, healing hugs, EA |
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