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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Shes in a frayed mental state Im sorry and apologize so My creation of harm came as Corruption of innocent, Yet deceiving I did the fowl of grungy Feelings of humanity Advantageous and wrong Halt this maddness A blinded bird in the wrong tree A glance of forged emotion And a broken branch of proof Stir and aware Her reserve is spilt And the sheets clump with smut Shes in a frayed mental state Im sorry and apologize so My creation of harm came as Corruption of innocent, Yet deceiving A trick and foreplay Strategy confusing A bad gift of greed Habit of secrecy Released from inside Ego of infinite negative size The contents in my stomache melt Unrealized sorts Of sporadic development Blue wick flame my condolence She was in a frayed mental state Im sorry and apologized so My creation of harm came as Corrution of innocent, Yet deceiving Mastery of empathetic sincerity Slight magicians hand Empowered gift of friendship A baited snare lies in wait For my button down black Center piece of comfort, control, and vice The illusion of accident and coincidence Scent and incense calm Slow down decision Pratice and liquid salt regret Her frayed mental Apologize Harm Innocent Deceit a trickle of music from a well |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Craig, this is a fine work. The best yet that I've seen from you. You should be proud of this and the strides you've made in this endeavor... Bravo, dude! Ed... |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx Ed. Comming from you that holds weight. Craig a trickle of music from a well |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Craig, yes, reads as a song . . . and umm for a moment I thought you were describing me Shes in a frayed mental state lol very fine work indeed xxoo |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I have to agree with the others.I think this is the best one you've done yet.It speaks volumes.  Crystal |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I'll agree, as well.. this has to be one of your many best. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is awesome. I loved this: "A glance of forged emotion And a broken branch of proof" AND this: "A trick and foreplay Strategy confusing A bad gift of greed Habit of secrecy Released from inside" I WILL be reading more of you in the future. |
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