Open Poetry #28 |
Sweet Release |
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Cry me a river of sweet release Let us sing in harmony Down to the river I pray I pray Thank you, Lord it shall sustain my soul drenched in Autumn rain now bound to yours one and the same The veil has been lifted hands bound with thyme My heart to yours and yours to mine Infinity ends just where it begins Come . . . call to me again |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Thank you, Lord it shall sustain my soul drenched in Autumn rain now bound to yours one and the same" Beautiful write here Sue. Much enjoyed the read this morn. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poem of "Sweet Release" is as sweet as your face... Sue, this is a very fine poem!!! Loveya! Linda |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Beautiful like a soft spoken song. Nice to read. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Yes, sweet. Gently sweet, thank you for sharing this. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LittleWing~ This is just so very lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Softly compelling.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Well done littlewing. I actually stopped to read this one twice. I wish I could say with such eloquence such words with simplicity. Thank-you very much. Looking forward to the next. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This mobius strip that we find ourselves on, is two-sided and yet exists on a single plane... One that crosses upon itself and continues.....unending. mmmmmm "In looking Northward, I see a light" |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Well done! KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Infinity ends just where it begins How cool is that, Hip hip hooray sweet lady. Love is lookin' good on ya tweets~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sue...*smiling at you* This is gorgeous... I just love the ALL of it. Love and hugs, my sis... If you judge people, you have no time to love them. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Wise, you are....and your words are both beautiful and true. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is a beautiful prayer, sweet friend, He will always hear your calling as He is the river also and flows with depth and grace! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Beautiful words, beautiful new picture.I like this style on you. Jason |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
littlewing--lovely and melodic...much enjoyed! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful Sue, and yet another pic change..what's with everybody lol |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicely penned,,,
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You continue to raise the bar...crafting so well these emotional writes. Enjoyed this. TD |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I remember the last "Release" poem you wrote so I had to read this one as well and, I liked the other one better but this is good too. Craig a trickle of music from a well |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful Sue, just beautiful. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, sweet sister, sue, a new day has come |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
my soul drenched in Autumn rain. Superb line........Great poem |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I definitely heard music with this one, Sue... a lovely little tune... |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I really, really liked this one, Sue. It is finding a place in my library. Thank you. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you so much Nancy Linda! you are so sweet - Oh My thank you Thank you Shara, that was a nice reply Your welcome icey . . . Thank you SmartChick! Thank you so much Marge scorpio . . . compelling wow thank you Hey Verse thank you so much Welcome! Ed - infinity m'darling . . . xxoo Thank you KJ! Thank ya Bluesygal I'm liking it on me too tweets Hey Sis, *smiling back* thank you Vicky Ed coming from you that means the world to me thank you Thank you Noah, am trying very hard to find that peace Thank you Jason , that was so sweet! Kris Thank you Thank you so much Martie! Raph thank you - it is all your fault with the pictures, you started a trend and this one is old, you know that . . . Thank you Q! Aww TD - that meant a lot to me thank you Thank you Vandana! Craig, *smile* I agree . . . thank you Thank you so much Chris! Ahh Michele and a beautiful sun that brings the day, thank you my sister . . . Thank you Mercury! Thank you Meg Thank you Karilea, that was so sweet Ben, that means the world to me, thank you Thanks guys xxoo |
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