navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #28 » Sweet Release
Open Poetry #28
Post A Reply Post New Topic Sweet Release Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York

0 posted 2003-09-10 08:29 AM



Cry me a river of sweet release
Let us sing in harmony

Down to the river
I pray
I pray
Thank you, Lord
it shall sustain
my soul  
drenched in Autumn rain
now bound to yours
one and the same

The veil has been lifted
hands bound with thyme
My heart to yours
and yours to mine

Infinity ends just where it begins

Come . . . call to me again

© Copyright 2003 Sue Eckam - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-09-10 09:11 AM


"Thank you, Lord
it shall sustain
my soul  
drenched in Autumn rain
now bound to yours
one and the same"

Beautiful write here Sue.
Much enjoyed the read this morn.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
   I still have sand in my shoes ~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-09-10 09:21 AM


This poem of "Sweet Release" is as sweet as your face...

Sue, this is a very fine poem!!!

Loveya!
Linda

SharaRose
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-09-10 09:22 AM


Beautiful like a soft spoken song. Nice to read.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

icebox
Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
4 posted 2003-09-10 09:36 AM


Yes, sweet.

Gently sweet, thank you for sharing this.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
5 posted 2003-09-10 09:45 AM


Beautiful!
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
6 posted 2003-09-10 09:51 AM


LittleWing~
This is just so very lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com   

scorpio
Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
7 posted 2003-09-10 09:58 AM


Softly compelling..

believe in what your heart feels...

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279

8 posted 2003-09-10 10:09 AM


Well done littlewing. I actually stopped to read this one twice. I wish I could say with such eloquence such words with simplicity. Thank-you very much. Looking forward to the next.
wranx
Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
9 posted 2003-09-10 10:15 AM


This mobius strip that we find ourselves on, is two-sided and yet exists on a single plane... One that crosses upon itself and continues.....unending.

mmmmmm

"In looking Northward, I see a light"


kayjay
Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015
Oregon
10 posted 2003-09-10 12:16 PM


Well done!  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
11 posted 2003-09-10 02:46 PM


Infinity ends just where it begins

How cool is that, Hip hip hooray sweet lady.

Love is lookin' good on ya tweets~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
12 posted 2003-09-10 02:57 PM



Sue...*smiling at you*

This is gorgeous...
I just love the ALL of it.

Love and hugs, my sis...

If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

Ratleader
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass
13 posted 2003-09-10 04:08 PM


Wise, you are....and your words are both beautiful and true.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
14 posted 2003-09-10 04:38 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is a beautiful prayer, sweet friend, He will always hear your calling as He is the river also and flows with depth and grace! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Jason Lyle
Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
15 posted 2003-09-10 05:00 PM


Beautiful words, beautiful new picture.I like this style on you.

Jason

Ceinwyn
Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA
16 posted 2003-09-10 05:37 PM


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
17 posted 2003-09-10 05:43 PM


littlewing--lovely and melodic...much enjoyed!
Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
18 posted 2003-09-10 05:57 PM


beautiful Sue, and yet another pic change..what's with everybody lol
QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
19 posted 2003-09-10 06:53 PM


very nicely penned,,,

                   

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
20 posted 2003-09-10 07:00 PM


You continue to raise the bar...crafting so well these emotional writes.  Enjoyed this.
TD

vandana
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
21 posted 2003-09-10 07:11 PM


nice
green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
22 posted 2003-09-10 08:59 PM


I remember the last "Release" poem you wrote so I had to read this one as well and, I liked the other one better but this is good too.

Craig

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Nightshade
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
23 posted 2003-09-10 09:14 PM


Beautiful Sue, just beautiful. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
            Emily Dickinson




    

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
24 posted 2003-09-10 09:14 PM


yes, sweet sister, sue,
a new day has come

MERCURY
Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190
Ireland
25 posted 2003-09-11 03:40 AM


my soul  
drenched in Autumn rain.
Superb line........Great poem

Kaoru
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow
26 posted 2003-09-11 04:18 AM


Beautiful.
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
27 posted 2003-09-11 06:45 AM



I definitely heard music
with this one, Sue...
a lovely little tune...

El_Campeador
Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761
Ohio, USA
28 posted 2003-09-11 08:23 AM


I really, really liked this one, Sue. It is finding a place in my library. Thank you.

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
29 posted 2003-09-11 09:38 PM


Thank you so much Nancy

Linda! you are so sweet - Oh My thank you

Thank you Shara, that was a nice reply  

Your welcome icey . . .

Thank you SmartChick!

Thank you so much Marge

scorpio . . . compelling wow thank you

Hey Verse thank you so much Welcome!

Ed - infinity m'darling . . .
xxoo

Thank you KJ!

Thank ya Bluesygal
I'm liking it on me too
tweets

Hey Sis, *smiling back*
thank you Vicky

Ed coming from you that means the world to me thank you  

Thank you Noah, am trying very hard to find that peace

Thank you Jason , that was so sweet!

Kris Thank you

Thank you so much Martie!

Raph thank you - it is all your fault with the pictures, you started a trend and this one is old, you know that . . .

Thank you Q!

Aww TD - that meant a lot to me thank you

Thank you Vandana!

Craig, *smile*  I agree . . . thank you

Thank you so much Chris!

Ahh Michele and a beautiful sun that brings the day, thank you my sister . . .

Thank you Mercury!

Thank you Meg

Thank you Karilea, that was so sweet

Ben, that means the world to me, thank you

Thanks guys
xxoo

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #28 » Sweet Release

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary