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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-09-09 08:17 PM


And You

The first time
she kissed me
was the moment
I knew that
I would remember
her kiss forever.

And I still do.
Though you are
so far away.
Forever, I will
remember you sweet
kiss, and you.

JamesLee
September07
2003

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-09 08:27 PM


very nicely written,,,

               

MorninGlory
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2 posted 2003-09-09 08:34 PM


Some things we just don't forget.. I'm a big kissing fan myself, and I remember some very special ones. Nicely done.
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-09-11 07:19 PM


Thank you QJQ and morninglory for the nice responses...James
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4 posted 2003-09-11 10:29 PM


Ahhhhhhhh ... what a fabulous way to be remembered. *sigh*

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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5 posted 2003-09-13 08:28 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwwww, this is so romantic with a tinge of sadness, sweet friend, but always cherish that kiss and know your lips are destined to anothers forever in the melody of God's will, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SharaRose
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6 posted 2003-09-13 08:52 PM


So sweet...but sad, too :'(

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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