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Abe
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Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2003-09-09 12:57 PM





TIME TO GO

I could see the flash of cannon
Over the ridge of the hill
Could hear the shots over my head
As I lay deathly still.


I looked up at the twinkling stars
Through the haze of the gunsmoke
And I could hear my comrades
Whispering as they spoke.


There was a quaking in their voice
That betrayed their mortal fear
And as I gazed into the sky
I asked, "What am I doing here?"


I thought of all those buddies
Killed on this foreign shore
And of loved ones back home
And then, I knew, "What for!"


To fight for God and Country
Is a calling, most will heed
To keep freedom safe from those
Who would plant an evil seed.


I lay there in my foxhole
Gripped by the numbing cold
But then, felt a warmth, from inside
Like I was held in the "fold".


I felt my best friend touch me
And couldn't believe he said,
"No need to call the corpsman,
'Cause he's already dead!"


And then my head felt light
As I looked down below,
Whispered, "I'll see ya', Bros
Because it's time for me to go!"

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Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2003-09-09 01:06 PM


This is great! I love the ending. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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2 posted 2003-09-09 09:56 PM


OhAbe~
I FELT the all of this one~

How tender ... how tender~

Beautifully penned dear friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com   

Paul Wilson
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3 posted 2003-09-09 11:16 PM


Abe...Great write. Really enjoyed even thou it's a reality of war. Thanks for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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