Open Poetry #28 |
A Soldiers Lament |
Abe Senior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 694Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end! |
TIME TO GO I could see the flash of cannon Over the ridge of the hill Could hear the shots over my head As I lay deathly still. I looked up at the twinkling stars Through the haze of the gunsmoke And I could hear my comrades Whispering as they spoke. There was a quaking in their voice That betrayed their mortal fear And as I gazed into the sky I asked, "What am I doing here?" I thought of all those buddies Killed on this foreign shore And of loved ones back home And then, I knew, "What for!" To fight for God and Country Is a calling, most will heed To keep freedom safe from those Who would plant an evil seed. I lay there in my foxhole Gripped by the numbing cold But then, felt a warmth, from inside Like I was held in the "fold". I felt my best friend touch me And couldn't believe he said, "No need to call the corpsman, 'Cause he's already dead!" And then my head felt light As I looked down below, Whispered, "I'll see ya', Bros Because it's time for me to go!" |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is great! I love the ending. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhAbe~ I FELT the all of this one~ How tender ... how tender~ Beautifully penned dear friend~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Abe...Great write. Really enjoyed even thou it's a reality of war. Thanks for sharing...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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