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Joe Houck
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0 posted 2003-09-09 03:54 AM



Oscillating Fan


From left
To right
One side
Content
Adjacent to
Dismay
Mind will sway
From one to another
Like oscillating fan
Lacking cover
Euphoric
To clinical
In moments
Time
Optimistic
To cynical
From rhyme
To rhyme
This is
My creation
My way of
Copeing
Immersed in
My wind
Desperately hoping
I learn how
To stay still
Oscillating fan
I am
I am

"The worst vice is advice" (Al Pacino, devil's advocate)

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1 posted 2003-09-09 04:20 AM


terrifically written,,
enjoyed very much,,

           

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2 posted 2003-09-09 05:14 AM


I see my fan in a whole new light, now.. it's kind of creepy..


Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-09-09 11:45 AM


Hi, Joe! This is so cute!--and imaginative!

I guess we are all like oscillating fans! We go this way, then that way and never staying in the balanced centre for long!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

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