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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-09-08 10:34 PM




as you fall asleep in the

moonlight

subliminal memories

tumble like the autumn

leaves

let me begin to love

you

and you will do the

same

the sky goes on forever

i keep dreaming about

riding on a comet

           

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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2003-09-08 10:36 PM


QjQ - after reading your poetry you are riding on a comet. Nice writing...

BC

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2 posted 2003-09-08 11:38 PM


Q, ooo, that was soooo romantic--and funny! I have this picture in my mind of you hanging on to the tail of a comet! That would be one hellova ride! Yippee eye kye yeah! Ride 'em cosmic cowboy!


EA


garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-09-09 12:07 PM


Glenn, I like this dreamy poem.
And this line is really good....

the sky goes on forever

I like that.
Hugs to you,
Ethel


Kaoru
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4 posted 2003-09-09 12:37 PM


I love this, very sleepy ride through space.. my favorite thing to do..
passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-09-09 01:24 AM



inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2003-09-09 06:45 AM


riding on a comet
kiss to kiss with the stars , lovvely visions
heavenly bliss

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