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......Celestial Ride......
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......Celestial Ride...... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. 
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as you fall asleep in the moonlight subliminal memories tumble like the autumn leaves let me begin to love you and you will do the same the sky goes on forever i keep dreaming about riding on a comet |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
QjQ - after reading your poetry you are riding on a comet. Nice writing... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Q, ooo, that was soooo romantic--and funny! I have this picture in my mind of you hanging on to the tail of a comet! That would be one hellova ride! Yippee eye kye yeah! Ride 'em cosmic cowboy!   EA |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Glenn, I like this dreamy poem. And this line is really good.... the sky goes on forever I like that.  Hugs to you,  Ethel |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I love this, very sleepy ride through space.. my favorite thing to do.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
riding on a comet kiss to kiss with the stars , lovvely visions heavenly bliss |
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