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TrackQueen83
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0 posted 2003-08-05 02:53 PM



Last time I talked to you
you were mad at me

well I wanted to tell you a few things

You’re a great person
you’re a huge impact on my life
our friendship meant the world to me

Now you’re going to move on
You’ll go to college
Meet new people

Thank you for everything that you’ve done
Thank you for listening

As I watch our friendship drift,
My heart will break
Tears will shed
Memories of you will always be in my heart.

Good luck in the future
If you ever talk to me
Maybe you’ll realize that I really am sorry.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-08-05 03:07 PM



Welcome to Passions!  I'll bet we can help fill up some of that "empty time" you'll find - so bring your poetry - make yourself at home, read, enjoy, relish a whole new world...

and, Check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Miah
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2 posted 2003-08-05 03:20 PM


Enjoyable first read.   maybe it won't be the last time, never say never.!  Welcome!
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-08-05 05:05 PM


A very emotional first post. I hope things
will get better. I look forward to reading
more from you.
And,  
Hugs  
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-08-27 01:43 AM




(big hugggssssssss) I understand ever so much how hard it is to move on and part from close friends, sweet friend, but know always that your friends will always rememnber you and cheer you on and they can always come back to you as this is a small world and anything is possible! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a beautifully heartfelt debut! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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