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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Rapture ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Rapture Slivered delight Falls about twi-of-night Covers me in sweet loving arms Bringing pleasured dreams to hold me 'til dawn Then pours the sunlight of your smile Keeping me anchored, love In this moment Rapture~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge, I do believe that one word fits very well with this poem. Great write and a perfect title... |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
So pretty Marge. Love, Betty |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Just beautiful, Marge. Hugs, ~Vicky Every heart hath its own ache. -Thomas Fuller |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Lovely to read you again. Very romantic poem Marge. Deb |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Galpal, this is some kind of hot, romantic love poem! What a great word, Rapture!! This is for sure a keeper. Huggles and Smiles, Marti Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
What a word, what a poem, what a poetess! Wonderful write! Patricia |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...I think I wrote one poem with the word rapture in it...it is such a big word, it's hard to find the right subject..but you did.  |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Your title is perfect for the poem! I loved it! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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