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Then, To Dream
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Then, To Dream |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Then, To Dream To gather twilight amid heaven’s stars T’would sleep, to dream, that wisdom comes through light Perhaps a dream shall tell me who you are To gather twilight amid heaven’s stars Perchance to see into our future far, Then I should wish to dream away the night To gather twilight amid heaven’s stars T’would sleep, to dream, as wisdom comes through light [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-04-2003 08:21 PM).] |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Karilea...oh, this is a breathtaking triolet. Whoah...keeping this forever! Warm hugs to you. Patricia |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...This is exquisite! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
This was wonderful! I enjoyed this very much.  |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
"K', what you been dreamin' lately girl. I'm not really clear yet on the triolet scheme. clue me in some- time would ya..? but it sounds good..! Oh, the font size was a little large using Internet Explorer, maybe lost it because of that. dale [This message has been edited by lucky (08-04-2003 08:15 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
you have mighty skills with those triolets  insanity is not a crime |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very lovely Karilea. hugs, Chris |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, wisdom does come through light! --and your light is very bright!  Nice photo of you going to bed!  Sweet dreams, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful light uplifting write |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
This is the best triolet I've read yet... I loved it! “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Not only is this beautiful, but you just taught me a new form of poetry...see why I like ya so much?  I'm keeping this~ Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sunshine...A beautiful poem. One that I will keep forever.Thanks for sharing...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Another beautiful triolet, Karilea. Aren't these fun to do? I think I might like them as well as the Rictameters.  Hugs  Ethel |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Love this, Karilea...simply gorgeous. If you judge people, you have no time to love them. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
My goodness you write with such grace . . . Perhaps a dream shall tell me who you are and you have this style down to perfection xxoo |
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jbsoria Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 26Phoenix, Arizona |
This was simply breathtaking. Your words flow so gracefully, and the pictures they create in my head are so beautiful! I, too, will keep this one forever. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutely stunning Sunshinygirl. M fate is not just |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
The picture is just outstanding and I love this line .... T’would sleep, to dream, that wisdom comes through light First there is darkness and then comes the light! Hugs, Marti Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
How do you find these extraordinary photos, surpassed only by your words. Simply lovely. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Fantastic!!... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow Karilea! This is just beautiful. Both, the picture and the poem. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - I love to dream of dreams. For some come true... BC |
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