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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-09-07 06:49 PM


I could never imagine
life without you
once you had arrived

and I let you stay

The taste of you
I had
was enough

for me
to say
we could work it out

whilst you
perhaps never
believed the promises you made
and the ones
you didn't

why say it
when you don't
mean it

I never asked
for the things you said

I never clung

but thrived

just
knowing

this time

it was different

and it was

but you
it seems
were just the same.....

Now you have left
I can never imagine
someone
could care for you
as much as I still do

It's not impossible
I know

then..
who you have
surrounded yourself with
care only
for good times
foolish moves

and
themselves

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-09-07 06:55 PM


Hey girl, I feel your despair in this.I wish I could comfort you in some way.Know this, he's the one that loses because you are an angel of life, a keeper of the stars, and an enchantress of the heart that will shine forever.
Crystal

Kaoru
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since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2003-09-07 07:06 PM


Gem.. I hear this.. I really do
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2003-09-07 09:41 PM


Oh how hard it is to believe someone cares, and find out later that it is only us wishing for their love.  This is so true, so sad, and you've put it into words so well...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Lotus Breeze
Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112

4 posted 2003-09-07 09:51 PM


Word here talk to me, I question unanswered question
Hoping my hope are good
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