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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2003-09-07 04:44 PM


autumn waves a greeting
from the distant east
yet it is only teasing
bringing fanciful thoughts
of cooler days
gentle rains
and bits of restful repose

the thermometer
still threatens heat
for days yet to come

for now, though,
I shall linger in these thoughts
of tempered, peaceful
cool

©September 7, 2003

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2003 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
1 posted 2003-09-07 05:51 PM


I know this feeling,  I think?  But,  thanx
to a tropical storm,  all I feel right now
is sorta "Springy"  and soggy!!

Nice write Virginia.

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
2 posted 2003-09-07 05:53 PM


It's been a little cooler here than nnormal, but it'll soon be heating up again.
Crystal

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
3 posted 2003-09-07 06:14 PM


wow, that was really soothing virginia. it had a beautiful flow to it.

I love autumn too. the leaves, the rain, the wind. makes you feel like taking walks, all bundled up.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
4 posted 2003-09-07 06:38 PM


yes!!  fall is in the air,, my time of year,,

       

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
5 posted 2003-09-08 02:38 AM


"I shall linger in these thoughts
of tempered, peaceful
cool"

~ and may I join you? Sounds wonderful to me!


EA

jbsoria
Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 26
Phoenix, Arizona
6 posted 2003-09-08 03:39 AM


Hits home.  We from Phoenix know what it's like!
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