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I beg for the end....
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I beg for the end.... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Apple of eye rots coreless vision I have seeds planted where you could not grow, She is gone now ~she ~ is ~ I~ plastic pseudo wisdom you posess such a long goodbye, Our paths will never cross I have circled too many squares with you impossible notion let go I tighten the grip on my own hand and beg for The End . Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
good one...difficult decission, but direct, honest and to the point...and needed for the benefit of closure...definately know where your coming from...good one... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I tighten the grip on my own hand and beg for The End . it does seem that way, doesnt it? if only we could do it for our own self preservation, o so hard tho... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Hey Gem..this is poetic perfection. oh god...I'm painting..it stinks so bad. Needed a break and you gave it to me  insanity is not a crime |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GemJop~ So many GREAT ORIGINAL lines in this piece~ Stunning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have a brilliant and creative mind--and a huge heart--sometimes too huge for your own well-being. You are strong--and you can survive anything, Dear One.   LL |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Consider me blown away. Kielo I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me.... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good,, enjoyed... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
you posess such a long goodbye Do I know this.. do I ever... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
great lines gem... *s M |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Well done, Gemma. Some neat stuff here. I especially like the opening lines. s.a.g. |
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