Smelling Smoke - Triolet/Tyburn Duet with Vicky

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Nan

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0 posted 2003-09-06 09:47 PM

Slinking
Thinking
Winking
Inking
Foggy matter slinking, thinking time
Whilst here I sit winking, inking rhyme

Penning perfect verse as day is breaking
Whilst my inner poet's slowly waking
Masterpiece of poetry in making
Penning perfect verse as day is breaking
Though all else in life I am forsaking
With the precious time that this is taking
Penning perfect verse as day is breaking
Whilst my inner poet's slowly waking

Writing verse is all in perfect timing.
As the fog lifts o’er the poet’s musing,
Idle quills arise to pen fine rhyming.
Writing verse is all in perfect timing,
Otherwise it’s not writely combining.
Minds befuddled jot verse quite amusing.
Writing verse is all in perfect timing,
As the fog lifts o’er the poet’s musing

Quilling
Spilling
Shilling
Willing
Poets pairing quilling, spilling ink
Penning for a shilling's willing wink

Vicky made Me do it...

[This message has been edited by Nan (09-06-2003 11:16 PM).]

QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-06 09:55 PM

ink very well spilled by two, lady poetess

Martie

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2 posted 2003-09-06 10:01 PM

Nan and Vicky....Wonderful!! So enjoyed by me.

and

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Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-09-06 10:07 PM

Oh wow! Wonderful ladies!
And..I would try it but it looks like it would be difficult.
Very much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs to you both, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes ~

Sunshine

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4 posted 2003-09-07 08:02 AM

Ah, the Taskmaster finally got
the teacher to let loose.

Aren't WE happy???

Kit McCallum

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5 posted 2003-09-07 09:10 AM

"Vicky made Me do it... "

And I'm glad she did! This was a delightful pairing ladies ... what a treat! Very much enjoyed you both!

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

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6 posted 2003-09-07 09:21 AM

Well God Bless Vikci because this is the finest defintion of writing I have ever seen, ladies
Bow to the masses . . .
go ahead, do it!
The both of you truly amaze me
xxoo

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7 posted 2003-09-07 10:08 AM

As Lawrence Welk would say, "Wunnerful! Wunnerful! Wunnerful!"---a

Thanks for teaching and entertaining!

&

Linda

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8 posted 2003-09-07 02:50 PM

Absolutley, positively, beautiful, I say!!!!
And, Nan and Vicky, you two know that I love it!!
Hugs to you both

Ethel

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9 posted 2003-09-07 05:32 PM

And that is you story and you are stickin'
to it! Right?

Excellently done, ladies....

angelblueyes
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10 posted 2003-09-07 05:48 PM

Brilliantly and wonderfully done.

Crystal

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11 posted 2003-09-07 07:17 PM

(big group angel hug) Oh Nan and Vicky, this is gorgeous, sweet friends I have never tried this form before and it looks like a fun, enjoyable three-ring circus! (smiles) You really got the quill gracing the page here, sweet friends, God Bless You Both, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Nan and Vicky, thank you both for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you both!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Bill Charles
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12 posted 2003-09-07 07:22 PM

Nan & Vicky - you two are amazing, this is excellent...

BCI

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13 posted 2003-09-07 07:28 PM

Nan & Vicky...What a duet the two of you make. This must have been fun for both of you, it shows through your words.Enjoyed...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

NewEnglandlazurlu
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14 posted 2003-09-07 09:35 PM

Hooray! Nan, I'm so happy to see something you've written. Girlfriend, I told you it had been waaaay to long.

And what a brilliant write you and Vicky have penned!

Great job ladies; enjoyed reading and studying it ... hugs, Marti

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15 posted 2003-09-07 11:20 PM

heap big smokin

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Mysteria

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16 posted 2003-09-07 11:53 PM

Now that looked like it took a lot of time to concoct, but it sure was worth it to see the result. Very nice collaboration you two

Nan

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17 posted 2003-09-08 07:21 AM

Vicky's just REALLY persistent, ya know? Ah well - whatever it takes to get my quilling willing, I guess...

Thank you all sincerely for stopping by to read...

suthern

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18 posted 2003-09-08 04:05 PM

Thank heavens Vicky made you du-et. *S* This is wonderful, ladies. *S*

Janet Marie
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19 posted 2003-09-09 12:02 PM

Triolet/Tyburn
==================
HUH??????????
there you go trying to confuse the moth.

well I dont know of the form or rules..but I know Im digging the alliterations and of course the rhymes divine and the cadence...Nan its always a rare treat for us to get to read you so thanks to Vicky-girl for being poetically persistant.

When was the last time you felt this high,
you are the best I've ever felt.
Its so wrong not to be with you
Its getting harder to stay away.

SH

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20 posted 2003-09-09 02:46 PM

Sure...blame it all on ME!
Oh well...what else is new? LOL

Thanks for 'playing', Nan. I truly enjoyed
writing this with you, and hope we can do it again.

Thanks, everyone, for all the kind comments.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this bit of poetic fun.

Love and hugs to all,
~Vicky
If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

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21 posted 2003-09-09 07:52 PM

What a wonderful duet you two make...pleasure reading indeed

Dark Angel
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22 posted 2003-09-09 08:38 PM

Ahhh the rhythm, the rhyme...perrfect to my ears.

Fantastic work both of you.

WICWLT.

Maree

p.s keeping it.

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

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