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Lotus Breeze
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0 posted 2003-09-06 05:03 PM


I gentle flower
Adding sweet fragrance to breeze
Your eyes see me here
Could the blossom to you please,
But leave me growing unpicked.


© Copyright 2003 Lotus Breeze - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-09-06 05:11 PM


LotusBreeze~
And like a fresh breeze you are, WELCOME TO PASSIONS~

This is a lovely, lovely Tanka, done to perfection~
Beautiful read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Lotus Breeze
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2 posted 2003-09-06 05:16 PM


You give kind words, pleases me,
I write in style I hope transcends my lack of writing

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-09-06 05:28 PM



Lotus, any style is acceptable...if you do have questions, we have a forum that will answer many of them, and any Moderator will be pleased to give you first hand assistance.  

Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

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4 posted 2003-09-06 05:39 PM




(smiles) You know, the lotus flower has always been regarded as the flower of dreams, helping ease people to sleep and meditate their rested souls with the most gorgeous visions! You sure have painted one here in this spellbinding debut, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your flowery words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

JilGirl
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5 posted 2003-09-06 07:13 PM


A most lovely write!
Welcome to PIP!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

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6 posted 2003-09-06 07:26 PM


This is a wonderfull place, and I can see you have a lt of potential. this is a great place to learn and grow, and develop your writing skills. I am glad you have found us, and gresat first post

insanity is not a crime

Lotus Breeze
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7 posted 2003-09-06 08:42 PM


Always many questions,
Now the words given back to me blushes me with happy
Kind all you are

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8 posted 2003-09-06 09:04 PM


May the fragrant petals of your pen fall gently upon these pages.
WELCOME!

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