Open Poetry #28 |
I Lotus |
Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
I gentle flower Adding sweet fragrance to breeze Your eyes see me here Could the blossom to you please, But leave me growing unpicked. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LotusBreeze~ And like a fresh breeze you are, WELCOME TO PASSIONS~ This is a lovely, lovely Tanka, done to perfection~ Beautiful read~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
You give kind words, pleases me, I write in style I hope transcends my lack of writing |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lotus, any style is acceptable...if you do have questions, we have a forum that will answer many of them, and any Moderator will be pleased to give you first hand assistance. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) You know, the lotus flower has always been regarded as the flower of dreams, helping ease people to sleep and meditate their rested souls with the most gorgeous visions! You sure have painted one here in this spellbinding debut, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your flowery words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
A most lovely write! Welcome to PIP! 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
This is a wonderfull place, and I can see you have a lt of potential. this is a great place to learn and grow, and develop your writing skills. I am glad you have found us, and gresat first post insanity is not a crime |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
Always many questions, Now the words given back to me blushes me with happy Kind all you are |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
May the fragrant petals of your pen fall gently upon these pages. WELCOME! |
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