Perhaps The Last Gift Of Summer

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Open Poetry #28

Perhaps The Last Gift Of Summer

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

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in the shadows

0 posted 2003-09-08 12:15 PM

Hard quiet beauty,
cold wind in your face,
watching the waves
with your back to me and the sun;

seeing you
I feel closer to god
her waves and her wind;
I want to reach out
to touch you,
just to say hello.

©2003 by icebox

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

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Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-09-08 12:17 PM

I like the way you show the beginning of one season and the end of another.Well penned.

Crystal

Martie

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California

2 posted 2003-09-08 12:27 PM

icebox

I was at the ocean today...the waves and a warm wind in my face, so I guess it wasn't me, but hello anyway.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-09-08 01:07 AM

icebox

passing shadows
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displaced

4 posted 2003-09-08 02:37 AM

*echoing hello*

Nan

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2003-09-08 07:35 AM

And a Hello from the great Atlantic - Just a bit northerly though - where glorious autumn hues shall soon grace our shores...

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

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Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2003-09-08 07:51 AM

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-09-08 08:23 AM

And...hello from the Great Lakes!
Still a warm breeze here...
but soon...change is in the air.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes ~

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

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Florida

8 posted 2003-09-08 08:43 AM

"seeing you
I feel closer to god"

Hmmm..love that line.

I would never have my back to you...

Susan

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