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Groveling in the Grotto
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Groveling in the Grotto |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Her outpouring is trapped within a body constricted, inside, she is a cloudburst - perpetual rain in clockwise churn where old dreams tumble into dull, oval stones and angler fish witness her unraveling unceremoniously swept, her dance with kelp and sand [This message has been edited by Corinne (09-07-2003 10:37 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne Now that is sad but well expressed.  |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Sad, but with deep emotion. Crystal |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed - Would only that we could always remain in perfect physique... with minds of equal acumen... Nicely penned, m'friend...  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Her outpouring is trapped within a body constricted, inside, she is a cloudburst - perpetual rain in clockwise churn where old dreams tumble into dull, oval stones and angler fish witness her unraveling unceremoniously swept, her dance with kelp and sand just had to show you my favorite lines... yeah... all of it... hope all is well with you |
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