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garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-09-05 10:33 PM

When she walked through the door
he was watching
every inch of her
looking              she felt his eyes across the crowded room
Attraction           of them              between

Then when she sat down to order her lunch
he came over        asking haven't
                                   we met before
She  knowing they haven't     He       knowing the same

She       saying she thought not         He       saying
                                 but you do look so familiar

As she looks at the menu
            He asks if he may       join her
She sees his empty plate    at his table
and looks at him        wondering      why

Knowing that he must think that she is an easy pick-up
That she will surely be charmed by him
his good looks         his sophisticated way
Oh, he does look good       fitted in his perfect clothes
               that fit him      SO  well
and his smell      Oh that smell
                                 so masculine  of   aftershave

Even if their ages are so different
there is such an attraction         there
A chemistry like she has   NEVER    felt before
And he
          he feels the same attraction    of them     between

She can tell this by the way he looks at her
                                at her every move
the way she talks    the way she smiles
                                    the curve of her
He      watches

Then he tells her of a nice quiet place
                                 he knows of
on the beach            by the water
with marvelous seafood there
        a dinner club where they can      dance

She says it sounds wonderful and  tells him that he can call her.......

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This is total fiction...not about me or anyone else I know at the moment

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-05-2003 10:41 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-09-05 10:38 PM

(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, this brought a tear to my eye because I dream so much to take a dream girl in the future on such a date and fill a day with magic for her! (kiss on cheek) Whether it's eal or fiction, your love poetry always has so much meaning and beauty, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-09-05 10:39 PM

But still just as loving as they always are! It's still about romance, and love between two in the wings.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-09-05 10:41 PM

very lovely and romantic. Haven't you ever wished that love was like a movie, so you could walk up to some stranger, and tell them that you love them. without them running away

ha, lov ya Ethel

insanity is not a crime

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-09-05 10:43 PM

Ethel! This has to be you at your finest!
You write romance perfectly!
I looooove this!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes ~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2003-09-06 12:10 PM

Even if their ages are so different
there is such an attraction there
A chemistry like she has NEVER felt before

It's a good thing...even if he never calls.

Thank you, and hugs Ethel dear~

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-09-06 12:54 PM

Beautiful work,

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2003-09-06 05:14 PM

I like this very much... when do we get the next installment? *G* Very romantic. *S*

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