Open Poetry #28 |
The Attraction Between |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
When she walked through the door he was watching every inch of her looking she felt his eyes across the crowded room Attraction of them between Then when she sat down to order her lunch he came over asking haven't we met before She knowing they haven't He knowing the same She saying she thought not He saying but you do look so familiar As she looks at the menu He asks if he may join her She sees his empty plate at his table and looks at him wondering why Knowing that he must think that she is an easy pick-up That she will surely be charmed by him his good looks his sophisticated way Oh, he does look good fitted in his perfect clothes that fit him SO well and his smell Oh that smell so masculine of aftershave Even if their ages are so different there is such an attraction there A chemistry like she has NEVER felt before And he he feels the same attraction of them between She can tell this by the way he looks at her at her every move the way she talks the way she smiles the curve of her He watches Then he tells her of a nice quiet place he knows of on the beach by the water with marvelous seafood there a dinner club where they can dance She says it sounds wonderful and tells him that he can call her....... . . This is total fiction...not about me or anyone else I know at the moment [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-05-2003 10:41 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, this brought a tear to my eye because I dream so much to take a dream girl in the future on such a date and fill a day with magic for her! (kiss on cheek) Whether it's eal or fiction, your love poetry always has so much meaning and beauty, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
But still just as loving as they always are! It's still about romance, and love between two in the wings. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
very lovely and romantic. Haven't you ever wished that love was like a movie, so you could walk up to some stranger, and tell them that you love them. without them running away ha, lov ya Ethel insanity is not a crime |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ethel! This has to be you at your finest! You write romance perfectly! I looooove this! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Even if their ages are so different there is such an attraction there A chemistry like she has NEVER felt before It's a good thing...even if he never calls. Thank you, and hugs Ethel dear~ |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful work, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... when do we get the next installment? *G* Very romantic. *S* |
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