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Ratleader

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0 posted 2003-09-05 04:32 PM

pointless
to ask

what

you won’t
tell

why

but please
can we
just

talk

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2003-09-05 04:37 PM

Probably not. I like the simplicity of this plaintive little poem, but I have to say the prognosis is not good.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Ratleader

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2 posted 2003-09-05 04:39 PM

.....snif.....

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-09-05 04:41 PM

Sure!

~and a hug~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes ~

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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4 posted 2003-09-05 04:46 PM

How many misunderstandings would be resolved much faster if the whats and whys were just explained instead of letting silence speak the displeasure. *S*

Excellent write, my friend... one of these days, you're gonna have to teach me how to make such a powerful statement in so few words! *S*

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

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5 posted 2003-09-05 05:03 PM

Yup let's talk... I love to talk and talk and talk

Wonderful Ed, so much said.

Maree

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-09-05 06:16 PM

I've asked this so many times...

Something from you I can relate to.

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~

7 posted 2003-09-05 06:49 PM

How do things get solved if people don't talk them out??? Makes no sense to me. :?

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

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8 posted 2003-09-05 07:45 PM

ahh yes . . . I do know this Ed

xxoo

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

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9 posted 2003-09-05 09:03 PM

I can relate to your words...been held in the grip of silence once too often.

Excellent write. So much said with so few words.

Patricia

Martie

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10 posted 2003-09-05 09:33 PM

Ed...talk to me...I'm better at listening.

Ratleader

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11 posted 2003-09-05 09:40 PM

Better at listening! Your worth is beyond rubies..........

Actually I wrote this as a result of playing with words, just balancing and building, practicing poetry -- not because of anything that's going on in my life. It seemed good to me, so I put it up....

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garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2003-09-05 10:11 PM

Ed, it IS good!! You thought right!!
I think I'm going to study you along with Local Rebel
on your poetry with few words. Both of you say so
much in such few words. I want to learn to do that!
Thanks for the lesson.

Hugs

Ethel

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