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Such A Small Thing
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Such A Small Thing |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Such A Small Thing ~*Marge Tindal*~  It seemed such a small thing hearing a tiny heart in break but oh my, oh ... my the quake the quake the quake~ It seemed such a small thing her tiny tears in fall but oh, oh ... my my my they were so big after all~ She seemed such a small thing that little spirit of my meet but oh, oh, oh how I felt the patter of her tiny feet~ She seemed such a small thing as upon the staircase she cowered ruffled flannel to her feet oh little Sarah please do not retreat~ It seemed such a small thing this moment between us but oh my ... my my my She smiled such a timid smile then quickly she ascended~ Sarah ... Sarah come back little waif I want to know your tears and why they fall ... I will not hurt you, Sarah I'll help you climb the wall over the years of conquer away away away from it all~ She seemed such a small thing but remains within my heart oh my ... oh my my my Sarah ... oh little Sarah come back when you are ready I'll be waiting ... I promise~ *I met the spirit of Sarah on a staircase at the Artisan, a local historic hotel and restaurant in our town* ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
She definitely picked the right person... for you do listen... and you see far beyond mere eyesight. *S* Lovely work, lady! |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Such a stirring write! You wove the tapestry for all to see and experience with you! True poetry! 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How very sensitive a write. Much enjoyed Marge...you have a tender heart. ~Hugs~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is so affecting. I was anxious at the end for her to come back to you. You drew me in, lady. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wanting to let you all know that my experience with Sarah happened just last evening~ I definitely will be going back to hopefully release the little spirit so she can find her way to where she needs to be~ Ya' go out on a limb with a reveal such as this ... but, it's nothing new to me ... been sitting those limbs all my life~ SuthernSweetheart~ I love you for your understand~ More than you will ever know~  JillGirl~ Thank you so much for the kind reply~ Enchantress~ Thank you ... I am simply receptor~ I so appreciate you~ Nan~ Oh ... I will certainly keep you posted~ Sarah and I will meet again real soon, I promise~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Marge this has so much feeling in it. I really love it. Let us know when you "see" her again. Love ya, Betty |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
An open heart, is an open door... Loved this Marge. TD |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh, Marge, what a wonderful experience for both you and Sarah. I am glad she found you and I know you can do much for her spirit. You will both be in my thoughts ... Luvs, Marti Nature always tends to act in the simplest way. |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
This should have had a tissue warning with it ......or perhaps its just because I saw myself as Sarah.....Never Give up Marge..........you will find her again. [This message has been edited by Lisann (09-05-2003 11:47 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, A beautiful write, enjoyed.  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
What a sweet and tender poem. It took a big heart to write this! Eric |
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heartpiper Member
since 2003-09-02
Posts 57 |
Beautiful regards Iyad "Hallow the body as a temple to comeliness and sanctify the heart as a sacrifice to love; love recompenses the adorers." |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Wow, marge, my mum once had a similar experience on a staircase, with a spirit of a child/children. She senses spirits all the time, and their emotions. Keeping this, it is tender and heartwrenching. I hope she is ok. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
chilling, but I smile |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Marge..... this is a very touching write. I hope you can help her find her way. alan |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
good penning lady poetess |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Marge...I love this tale of a ghostly meeting with the little girl named, Sarah. Beautifully penned and I could almost imagine your surprise at meeting her. The repetition of your phrases outstanding in this poem. ***Ivy Rose |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"It seemed such a small thing her tiny tears in fall but oh, oh ... my my my they were so big after all~" Beautifully rendered Marge ... a whisper to the spirit from a "gentle spirit". May she cross over and have peace.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Taking the liberty of  ing this one to the Today's Topics page for someone to find .... and knowing he will know why~~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (07-06-2006 05:41 PM).] |
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