Open Poetry #28 |
Look Into My Eyes.... |
ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
If you look, Deep into my eyes, You will see, in them, The fire of desire, For you. My restless eyes, Are desperately, Searching you. My eyes have blurred, And filled with water, Due to their intense gaze, On the pathway, And hours, maybe days, Have passed meanwhile, And you have not appeared. Still with my drooping eyes, I am waiting, Trying to fix, My eyes on pathway, In the hope To catch a glimpse, Of you, While you pass by, On your way, To the temple for worship. How much, My silent eyes reveal, If only you have, A moment’s time, To look into them. In them, You will find, Ocean filled with love, For you, And then slowly, You will be drowned, In that ocean, Along with me. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very touching and lovely,,, |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
For some reason, when I read this I saw an oriental scene, with a pagoda in the background. Maybe it was the tone of the poem, I don't know. But I did enjoy it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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