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ambrish
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since 2003-03-27
Posts 257
India

0 posted 2003-09-05 08:33 AM



If you look,
Deep into my eyes,
You will see, in them,
The fire of desire,
For you.

My restless eyes,
Are desperately,
Searching you.
My eyes have blurred,
And filled with water,
Due to their intense gaze,
On the pathway,
And hours, maybe days,
Have passed meanwhile,
And you have not appeared.

Still with my drooping eyes,
I am waiting,
Trying to fix,
My eyes on pathway,
In the hope
To catch a glimpse,
Of you,
While you pass by,
On your way,
To the temple for worship.

How much,
My silent eyes reveal,
If only you have,
A moment’s time,
To look into them.

In them,
You will find,
Ocean filled with love,
For you,
And then slowly,
You will be drowned,
In that ocean,
Along with me.


© Copyright 2003 Ambrish Parihar - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
1 posted 2003-09-05 08:06 PM


very touching and lovely,,,

             


Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
2 posted 2003-09-05 11:47 PM


For some reason, when I read this I saw an oriental scene, with a pagoda in the background. Maybe it was the tone of the poem, I don't know. But I did enjoy it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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