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Open Poetry #28

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MERCURY
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2003-09-04 04:54 AM

Just once more,

For old times sake,

Let me devour it whole,

Since it has corrupted me.

Payback is all I seek,

Time has no meaning to me.

You wronged me once and I accepted,

Curiosity had a stranglehold of me.

Reason was updated,

All the bases were covered,

Yet, through the light I searched for darkness.

Can I have just one more,

To finally put to rest,

Fleeting visions of fancy which don’t concern me.

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

1 posted 2003-09-04 04:59 AM

its like your inside my head! good write

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-04 05:30 AM

very nicely penned,,,

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-09-04 06:46 AM

thoughts well woven together in this

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2003-09-04 08:48 AM

This was truthful and once my very own feelings...adding how he lied...and used...and blamed me....so, I'm right there with you dearheart...and it does hurt...but then, something happens, anger leaves...pain subsides, and you realize, that it wasn't meant to be, thankfully so...never to venture there again.

So dry your tears and listen up, cause todays a brand new day....you've gained tons and lost nothing...love to you and yours

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2003-09-05 11:49 PM

Fleeting visions of fancy, do tempt~
Nice write MERCURY~

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