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MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16
Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2003-09-05 05:06 AM



3 seconds from madness

In a world I can’t understand

3 seconds from madness

Fear is at my command.



2 seconds from sorrow

The pain will never subside

2 seconds from sorrow

I’m diving into the tide.



1 second from love

My arms are open wide

1 second from love

I swim back to the seaside.


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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-09-05 05:21 AM


Awwww...now see...that's what love will do for you.....give you hope!!! Sounds like someone threw you a life saver just in time! I loved the way this ended.


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Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-09-05 09:08 AM


Enjoy the safe,warm and loving shoreline!


EA

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2003-09-05 09:10 AM


MERCURY
Enjoyed the wrie.

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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Florida, USA
4 posted 2003-09-05 09:11 AM


Yep, love will do that for you.
Hugs  
Ethel

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
5 posted 2003-09-05 09:40 AM


Very nice!



Susan

angelblueyes
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Oklahoma
6 posted 2003-09-05 12:14 PM


Very much enjoyed.
Crystal

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