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Kiss Me
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Kiss Me |
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lotusblossom Junior Member
since 2003-09-04
Posts 10 |
Kiss Me Kiss me in the morning while the moon is still in view Soft, caress me darling while the grass is sweet with dew Thrill me with the teasing touch of fingers seeking sin Whisper that you love me, dear - then kiss me once again Think of me at mid-day when the sun is high above Reach to me and pull me close within your thoughts of love I'll be dreaming of you, waiting for the moment when You'll be here beside me and you'll kiss me once again Meet me in the dark of night with stars in perfect shine Love me with a passion sweeter than the finest wine Hold me till the sunrise paints a glow upon your skin Wake me with your tender touch - then kiss me once again Morning, noon, or dark of night, my love, you know it's true Wanting lips are hungry for the taste of kissing you |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful first post! Welcome to PIP!  |
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lotusblossom Junior Member
since 2003-09-04
Posts 10 |
Kaoru- Thank you for the welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. -lotusblossom |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Meet me in the dark of night with stars in perfect shine Love me with a passion sweeter than the finest wine Hold me till the sunrise paints a glow upon your skin Wake me with your tender touch - then kiss me once again Morning, noon, or dark of night, my love, you know it's true Wanting lips are hungry for the taste of kissing you Lotusblossum, this is a beautiful first post. I really enjoyed reading it and know I'm going to enjoy reading more of your poetry. Welcome to Passions In Poetry. I hope that you like it here.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is such a romantic lovely debut, sweet friend, and may the sun always paint the visions of your love and smiles deep in your heart forever, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your gorgeous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
This is sweet, and loving.. I like!!  Shara @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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jbsoria Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 26Phoenix, Arizona |
This poem put beautiful pictures in my head. I'm sure I'll get a good night's sleep now, dreaming of someone reading it to me! |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
Morning, noon, or dark of night, my love, you know it's true Wanting lips are hungry for the taste of kissing you its passionate full of love and flow. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Aside from your wonderful theme (there can never be too much "love" in our lives)... You've written in flawless trochaic heptameter - This isn't an easy feat, as trochaic verse is considerably more difficult than iambic... This is a beautifully constructed poem, and a grand entree to Passions in Poetry. You'll find a comfy home here among our poets. Settle in and enjoy...  Check your email for a special greeting... |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
nice love poem good writing keep it up bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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lotusblossom Junior Member
since 2003-09-04
Posts 10 |
Wow. Thank you all so much for the warm welcome and the generous comments. You're all great! I think I'm going to like it here. -lotusblossom |
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