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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-08-05 07:15 AM

Framed in onxy,
the moon cannot restrain its love.

Aglow between black branches
it glitters the sea,

with a million eyes upon it
it stays a solitary moon.

Approaching silver,
the blushing bride
cannot hold back,

Scarlet fever strays beneath
the dress of ancient white.

With eyes upon her,
she mops her tainted pedestal,

for now,
the solitary martyr.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-06-2003 10:34 PM).]

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-08-05 07:33 AM

I don't know how you do it, but you do it everytime.No matter the subject you write wonderfully.
angelblueyes

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-08-05 08:52 AM

Very nice...James

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

3 posted 2003-08-05 08:54 AM

God I love reading you.

Jason

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2003-08-05 09:25 AM

You find the most beautiful words... Thanks for the read.

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

5 posted 2003-08-05 08:16 PM

Very deep....almost beyond my poor comprehension but as always, I enjoy your "stuff".

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-08-06 12:12 PM

Michele, am I off or are you speaking of a coming into her own of sorts?
It is a beautiful image you have left me
either way . . .
the moon - amazing imagery
xxoo

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

7 posted 2003-08-06 12:16 PM

heh everyone beats me to the good lines =oP

I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away,
Live again, here forever, the spiral never ends. Godsmack

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

8 posted 2003-08-06 08:06 AM

splendid imagery in beautiful lines form a great write...

regards
sudhir

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2003-08-06 02:48 PM

Michele - that moon will get ya everytime...

BC

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

10 posted 2003-08-06 03:14 PM

terrific penning,,,

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-08-06 03:21 PM

You do have a way with words, Michele,
and I do enjoy reading them.

Hugs

Ethel

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

12 posted 2003-08-06 10:11 PM

Framed in onxy,
the moon cannot restrain its love.

Aglow between black branches
it glitters the sea,
a million eyes upon it
=======================

stunning imagery and clever employ of theme, metaphor and personifi.
Lovely writing poetess inked

"How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you."

LH

PassionandFun
Member

since 2003-07-30

Posts 60

13 posted 2003-08-07 09:43 AM

Deep, dark and visually interesting all at the same time; interesting use of the words "tainted" and "martyr" in the same sentence...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

14 posted 2003-08-07 10:19 AM

Impressive poetry!
You share a sense of beauty combined with solitude that hurts.
Love and hugs. Margherita

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

15 posted 2003-08-27 09:52 PM

Being a martyr aint so bad....sometimes. Unless they burn you on a cross, then you become a saint!

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