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Open Poetry #28

Pile of Stones

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

0 posted 2003-09-04 01:32 PM

This is for everyone whoever started off as one person but life(& circumstances) changed them into another

Once I was a tower
A castle seemingly unpenetrable
But then I was besieged
A heap of rubble I became
My tower fell

"Rebuild." "Rebuild"
They cry
But now defeated
I have no illusions of grandeur
Rebuild?
No, Reborn

Now I am a pile of stones
You can burn me
You can crush me
You can toss me into the sea
But I will always be me
Eternally
Reborn
A pile of stones

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-09-04 02:10 PM

This is magnificant!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-09-04 02:51 PM

Jacqueline...

You are so right.
This can fit so many people
who will only acknowledge it.

Problem is, sometimes some of us
are not aware that we change.

However, I think poets see it
everyday.

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-09-04 09:38 PM

Wow.

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-09-04 09:41 PM

(smiles) God Bless You, sweet Jacqueline, I have missed your gorgeous words so much and I just love the faith and determination you have here, as the sediments and pebbles will always live on and you will only be reborn forever! (kiss on cheek) I just love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jacqueline, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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