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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-09-04 10:16 AM



drowning
stifled
air thickened,
its
down
pouring
suffocating
strangling
any creativity
feeling powerless
to
overcome

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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bslicker
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state of mind
1 posted 2003-09-04 10:24 AM


but you seem to create it just the same
good write
bernie



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Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (09-04-2003 10:33 AM).]

KristieSue
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2 posted 2003-09-04 10:28 AM


guess there are many ways to drown

good job

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

Susan Caldwell
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Florida
3 posted 2003-09-04 11:45 AM


I suffocate on my own stupidity at times...

Susan

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-09-04 12:09 PM


Drowning, whether it be by rain or teardrops, can result in some pretty interesting writes!


EA


nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2003-09-04 09:13 PM


and here I thought I was drowning in rainwater...


until I checked my basement and found it was flooded with sewerage...nice day I spent today...even nicer tomorrow if and after the plumber comes...

~sighing~

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