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Final Destination |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Grace comes like a precious metal Vaporized among all things sweet And tears, as well…prime soil for seeds Possessing our souls in rivulet panoramas Like the luster of aged nostalgia Balancing Dripping rarest blooms of acumen Reflecting blessings that we didn’t know By name or place midst the silence crystal Smiling gentle azure halos, where soul and spirit Convene Sprouting limbs, adorning emotions, dancing tenderly Canopies of places tranquil, serene, Mantras opening gateways to a place of soft embrace Tufts of gentle curves, we oft visit Leaving to soon…and resolute With this mist of silence previews determined Tumbling fat minuets singing purest wine To whet our appetites and coo of images divine Springing from our present moods Leaping like gazing whispering stars A breath of spring in whirling winter’s plight Joining every part of waking morning Familiar promised memories, twinkle space and time Priceless source of veracity, our very essence Where euphoria inflames my heart Never losing meaning Pure soil, virgin foamy seas and magical eyes, glistening Where broad strong muscles of mountains high Girth a shrine of love, like a messenger feathering Simple joys of life and living, timeless desires Simple yet so magnificent Leaving visions beyond compare loud and clear Fueling all those delicate compounds of elements With incentive atoms in the air There, waiting with opened arms & harps In humid encouraging fields of green Pulling threads of golden wheat entwined Multiplied by increasing beatitude Singing with gracious ease A breeze recites on air streams of proverbial time Where harmony and love becomes a magestic reals of paradise |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whoops, typo, last line should read, realm of paradise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ I'd say all that and more. LOL well done. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good penning lady poetress |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
Your poem never lost meaning. Very good indeed. |
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