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so far so far |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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And there is so far to go before the beginning and the owl’s watch across the woods it seems is fair and all the little things are there so far so far To find the expanse of air and sing oh I know how it comes up from the heart to start and warbles greenly filled and stilled can’t find a name to make a title above the place where sound travels can’t find the syncopation right feel it flood me in the night then soon as time turns down the dark it’s gone like white wine in the park And there is so far to go to the end of this you know all fluttered and gaining wing I hide in underneath of things waiting for the wind that’s mine around about and under rhyme Catch me can you see the cloth I wear in color magic gloss at last to see the beams of trees below the fastest part of me less the stumble rock of air will know the me so hard placed there So touch this substance known as real and kiss the doubt off cold then seal with all the little things out there so far so far [This message has been edited by Martie (09-04-2003 09:30 AM).] |
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kaleanna Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 89TX, USA |
good write good read Meesh |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"And there is so far to go to the end of this you know..." Well...yes, it's true. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
A good write here. Crystal |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Magic. You write magic, weave it into a carpet, and take us for a ride..... Thank you for this, and for all the others. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sis~ To be allowed the privilege of reading you is worth more than I could ever tell you~ 'And there is so far to go to the end of this you know all fluttered and gaining wing I hide in underneath of things waiting for the wind that’s mine around about and under rhyme' And I shall always look for the winging of your rhyme~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What Ed said... And, this is so YOU dear Martie... You write so beautifully...seemingly effortlessly. One day...teach me how you do this...magic? ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Your poetry to me is like following Alice in wonderland.  |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - I read your poetry and you take me to places I only get access to when I read you. This great - just great! Paul |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I hide in underneath of things waiting for the wind that’s mine around about and under rhyme" ~ A lovely write, Dear Will-o-the-wisp!  EA |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Always the mystical romantic in you... and I think Sy said it best.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I hide in underneath of things waiting for the wind that’s mine In a magical whole, these lines touch me most... beautiful work! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
So touch this substance known as real and kiss the doubt off cold then seal with all the little things out there so far so far Oh, Martie, this is so pretty...I felt like I was just skipping along on clouds as I read it.  Hugs to you, sweet lady Ethel |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
And there is so far to go to the end of this you know all fluttered and gaining wing I hide in underneath of things me thinks you show more than you know... very nicely done.. as usual. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Martie . . . And there is so far to go to the end of this you know all fluttered and gaining wing I hide in underneath of things waiting for the wind that’s mine ahhhh . . . but I do believe you see beneath the brush quite well xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) And always take to heart that those beautiful things that work as tourniquet to doubt's wounds are closer than you think, they are just a heartbeat away! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very very nice...yet again, you write a beauty! Ed |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Martie, know what this reminded me of? The gliders and big kites behind my house on the mountain, wonder why? What absolutely beautiful, effortless writing you always give us, and the best part for me is that you get my gray matter working full force  Beautiful! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You've taken me on a lovely poetic adventure... Again - Thank you kind lady...  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I am very pleased that you are the only person who can write as you do. You are so unique in your expression.....I love it! PS....I brought my pen knife... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
so far indeed-- lovely writing Martie- as is your norm. at least,~so far~  jThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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