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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-09-03 08:52 PM



The smile of your face
as it drifts in and out
of my mind. makes
me long for you
all the time.

The sweet smell of
your aftershave
makes me want
you all the more so
please come home
fast as can be.

without you dear
I can never be
completely me.

© Copyright 2003 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-09-03 08:54 PM


I hope your thoughts are answered.Nicely penned here.
Crystal

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-09-03 08:56 PM


I think you could...you choose not to be...for love...nice writing...James
QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
3 posted 2003-09-03 09:40 PM


touching and heart felt write,,,

         


Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
4 posted 2003-09-03 10:17 PM


thanks for the kinds words

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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