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kayjay
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0 posted 2003-09-03 12:51 PM



Rays of setting sun
Blazing ghosts in fiery robes
Smoky from the flames

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

© Copyright 2003 Ken Julkowski - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-09-03 12:59 PM


ahhhhh, the sheer mystic revelations...how sweet it is, as is your poem.  
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-09-03 01:07 PM


Excellent Ken!
So good to read your words here again.
So sad the fires and the devastation.
Be well..be safe...
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
  I still have the sand in my shoes ~

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-09-03 01:34 PM



It does paint a picture.
And gives rise to people
pulling out their bibles.

Take care...and stay clear.

Martie
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4 posted 2003-09-03 03:13 PM


kayjay

I have read about the fires in Oregon..I hope you are safe!  

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-09-03 03:42 PM


Hi! Ken!

A sad, but well-stated, senryu. The forest fires are truly tragic on so many levels.


Linda

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6 posted 2003-09-03 08:05 PM


This is a tragic thing, but so vivid in your words.
Crystal

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7 posted 2003-09-03 09:25 PM


Ken, this is interesting. I hope all
is well with you.
Hugs  
Ethel

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