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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2003-09-02 12:15 PM

Oh, the mist that rises
reminds me then
of then
and you

Your hands
touched as softly as
your eyes
a grazing caress
on my longing
sighs

I'd ask it be gone
but I know it a vain
and empty wish
for in this morning
and at this time
it is you
I miss

By noon it will fade
as will this empty blue
what a fool you were

If only you knew....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-09-02 12:48 PM

First day back from vacation on the water...
I'm still drifting...and this piece continues
to make me want to hold onto
the sad longing I have inside.
So beautifully written Ron...much enjoyed.
~Soft smiles, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

2 posted 2003-09-02 12:57 PM

yeah, if she only knew....

*sigh*

great write

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-09-02 01:10 PM

Ron, such beauty in your words and yes:

If only you knew....

they never will, you know
or maybe one day wayy too late
*smile*
I know
xxoo

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-09-02 01:40 PM

Fog = introspection
Poem = drift
Poet = Cpat Hair

Well done, Sir

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 2003-09-02 09:16 PM

Oh, how I can relate to this one

Love’s Mist

I dream of you
on the deck of a ship
soft haze enveloping you
as night sets in

I am jealous of the mist
I long to wrap myself around you
like a comfortable robe
swaddling you in my body

Let me sing to you
the oceans lullaby
hear my voice in its rhythm
see my face in the waves
feel my kisses in the spray
and crash upon my shores

Today, you sail the sea
~tomorrow, sail to me

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2003-09-02 11:24 PM

Ron

Your poem is like mist, a gauze of soft and sensual.

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

7 posted 2003-09-03 02:19 AM

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

8 posted 2003-09-03 02:29 AM

...sigh

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

9 posted 2003-09-03 04:50 AM

Ron...A very touching write. I hope all is well with you. Thanks for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2003-09-03 04:57 AM

Oh my...yes...if only...

Simply beautiful, Ron...this whispers.

Hugs,
~Vicky
"Deep inside this armor, the warrior is a child."
~Twila Paris

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2003-09-03 08:04 AM

Your hands
touched as softly as
your eyes
a grazing caress
on my longing
sighs

there is nothing more spiritual and complete

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

12 posted 2003-09-03 08:09 AM

Oh I just love the fog and I love your poem too Cpat.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2003-09-03 09:04 AM

Indeed, what a "fool" she was...

EA

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

14 posted 2003-09-03 09:29 AM

"Your hands
touched as softly as
your eyes
a grazing caress
on my longing
sighs"

I loved that stanza, leaves such a feeling of missed touch..

Susan

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

15 posted 2003-09-03 09:41 AM

I'd ask it be gone
but I know it a vain
and empty wish
for in this morning
and at this time
it is you
I miss

Capt. Ron, this is a very touching poem.

Hugs to you

Ethel

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

16 posted 2003-09-03 09:44 AM

The gentleness of your writings
leaves an invisible mark
on one's skin.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

17 posted 2003-09-03 03:08 PM

*sighs*

You really should write more!

~Tier

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

18 posted 2003-09-03 08:12 PM

*sigh* If she knew she wouldn't have ever left.Seh ahs lost so much and you will reiceve the most tender love that you so deserve

Crystal

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

19 posted 2003-09-03 09:25 PM

Sometimes they do know... and it just doesn't matter. *S* Fool indeed.

I like this very much Cap'n. *S*

Lady Godiva
Junior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 35
at the bottom of your glass

20 posted 2003-09-03 09:34 PM

I second that *sigh*

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