Open Poetry #28 |
Whether Patterns |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Shattering before me, into fragments, patterns strange Stripped of color, and all cover, shimmering in thorough change I may see it as uncertain, but through findings, the reverse Somewhat jagged the intention neither blessing, nor a curse Choices plenty by the feeling resurrected from dismay If by toss into the loss, might there be a brighter day? Pulling into clouds as blankets, jumping up and down until Finally skyward reconstruction building by a loving will Softly falling, gently earthbound, my conviction to be seen Choosing only what is solely of the best I’ve come or been Sculpting better consequences, making sense an equal part And to see a life I’ve chosen, more of me to live by heart Gallant horses take the shaping of the chariot I construct Down and velvet line the pockets of the words pronounced and tucked The relations of my body and my soul remain in twin A gift truly given to me that I own and hold within Smiles for sharing, appreciation for the world in which I live Keeping current disposition in the taking that I give A reminder of the human, to accept an empty cup Walking often to the clear well, dipping deep and filling up Better able to be stable in the messages that trade From my heart into your keeping by the open hearth I’ve made And a garden, ever blooming to sit quietly and stir Dreams I share without illusion, loved with honor to be sure And I see the glass is falling from the heavens to be found Taking shape in the reflection of the worth of joy unbound Breaking molds that never served me, making new a work of art In your presence to be truly all the love that fills my heart Copyright Kkh 9/7/03 |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
wow lady poetess you have penned a beautiful piece of poetry,,,
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
A reminder of the human, to accept an empty cup Walking often to the clear well, dipping deep and filling up words of wisdom, as the entire poem is a vision of maturity and growth, very nice work |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
And I see the glass is falling from the heavens to be found Taking shape in the reflection of the worth of joy unbound Breaking molds that never served me, making new a work of art In your presence to be truly all the love that fills my heart Kathleen, once again, you have made me speechless!! Awesome work, lady. Hugs Ethel |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I'm in absolute awe!!!! Crystal |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
No doubt in my mind that you had a sharp pencil and a hot muse before you decided to sit down and write this one.... Very well done K. your rhyme and flow is virtually impeccable....flawless. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Softly falling, gently earthbound, my conviction to be seen Choosing only what is solely of the best I’ve come or been Sculpting better consequences, making sense an equal part And to see a life I’ve chosen, more of me to live by heart Your writing is an endless flow Kathleen. This is a beauty, like all your poems that have come before. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Smiles for sharing, appreciation for the world in which I live Keeping current disposition in the taking that I give A reminder of the human, to accept an empty cup Walking often to the clear well, dipping deep and filling up" Oh how I love that! Susan |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD Again and again you amaze me with your flawless poetry. I wish I could write like the beauty in this! |
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